李志曉　劉耀宏

2008年各省市高考英語作文題材多種多樣，難度適中，基本上都是貼近中學(xué)生的話題。無論哪一種題材考生都可以應(yīng)用較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)、高級詞匯和一些過渡詞。如果考生在作文時用詞準(zhǔn)確、過渡自然、結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊、語法結(jié)構(gòu)合理、語言點齊全、詞數(shù)達(dá)標(biāo)，那么它就是一篇成功的習(xí)作。以下是對2008年各省市高考英語作文精華的幾項展示。

1.NMET 2008全國卷ll

【精彩句子賞析】

It should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs，because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily.

【句型句式歸納】

It also helps to watch TV and read books，newspapers and magazines in Chinese

whenever possible.

【連貫、高級詞匯升華】

First ...then ...；besides ...；a Chinese course；your fellow students

2.NMET 2008全國卷I

【精彩句子賞析】

Id like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work，because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.

【句型句式歸納】

Could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday?

【連貫、高級詞匯升華】

Now；By the way；a panda lover；gave birth to；in advance

3.NMET 2008江蘇卷

【精彩句子賞析】

Good listening can always show respect，promote understanding，and improve interpersonal relationship.

Show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile；be open-minded to different opinions even though you dont like them.

【句型句式歸納】

What I want to stress is that each of us should listen more to others.

Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children，so they will understand them better，and find it easy to narrow the generation gap.

【連貫、高級詞匯升華】

So；and；thus；In a word；interpersonal relationship；narrow the generation gap；meet their needs；a supportive silence；a knowing smile.

4.NMET 2008 遼寧卷

【精彩句子賞析】

We should develop a good attitude to life.

Knowledge is power.

【句型句式歸納】

In order to study well，we need to do sports so that we can keep fit.

Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times.

【連貫、高級詞匯升華】

Firstly，secondly；develop a good attitude；consists of；for this goal；enjoy life

5.NMET 2008 四川卷

【精彩句子賞析】

I believe that doing all these small things will improve our environment and help make our world a better place to live in.

【句型句式歸納】

I will not use things like paper cups and disposable chopsticks because they are made of wood.

【連貫、高級詞匯升華】

For me；For example；wisely；disposable；use both sides of paper

6.NMET 2008陜西卷

【精彩句子賞析】

So I think “Friday New Hour” can broaden our mind and enrich our school life.

I am sure everyone will benefit a lot from this activity.

【句型句式歸納】

Seldom do we know what is happening both at home and abroad，let alone what we can do for our country.

And we should make a choice about what well read.

【連貫、高級詞匯升華】

But；So；Whats more；As for；broaden our mind；enrich our school life；benefit from

7.NMET 2008湖北卷

【精彩句子賞析】

I was so desperate on hearing that.

It was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.

【句型句式歸納】

...but was told that the model had been sold out.

I require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.

【連貫、高級詞匯升華】

Later；Then；but；Therefore；desperate；consideration；spare parts

8.NMET 2008福建卷

【精彩句子賞析】

The aim of this activity impressed me greatly.

Therefore I recommend myself to you without hesitation.

【句型句式歸納】

I think it instructive to learn to live together by living together.

I can improve my English，make more friends，and enrich my life.

【連貫、高級詞匯升華】

Therefore；For one thing，...for another thing；impressed；instructive；outgoing；enrich；recommend.

9.NMET 2008北京卷

【精彩句子賞析】

While we are confident in ourselves，we should recognize strengths in others and show our respect for them.

We were shocked to see litter here and there.

We came up with several choices such as going boating，climbing a mountain，and going to an amusement park.

【句型句式歸納】

I think the compasses are reasonable to be proud because no one else can do the job better.

While climbing the mountain，we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view.

【連貫、高級詞匯升華】

Finally；However；Then；Afterwards；At the same time；So in my opinion；litter；respectively；hard-working；confident；strengths；show our respect for them

10.NMET 2008安徽卷

【精彩句子賞析】

I believe that the wide use of these shopping bags can greatly improve our environment.

More and more people in China have realized the advantages of such bags and started using them.

【句型句式歸納】

Im glad that youve noticed our efforts directed towards environmental protection.

These bags are made of a variety of material that can be easily treated when they become rubbish.

【連貫、高級詞匯升華】

Besides；directed；concern；an even cleaner place

11.NMET 2008湖南卷

【精彩句子賞析】

I cannot help being moved by its author.

I admire Helen because she is optimistic about life.

For a disabled person like her，this was really a wonder.

【句型句式歸納】

Her story tells us that we should value what we have and try our best to overcome any difficulty in life.

Since then she has lived in a world of darkness and silence，and communication has seemed only a dream for her.

【連貫、高級詞匯升華】

But；optimistic；Under the guidance of；wonder；overcome

12.NMET 2008 浙江卷

【精彩句子賞析】

They may work out better ways to get work done by discussion.

I prefer to work in a team，which offers me a chance to learn how to get along with others and to share my experiences with them.

【句型句式歸納】

People can decide for themselves when to start and how to do it.

People may also choose to work in a team，which offers me a chance to learn from each other and help each other.

【連貫、高級詞匯升華】

In this way；whats more；besides；personally；basically；on their own；efficiently.

13.NMET 2008山東卷

【精彩句子賞析】

The following tips may be a help to you.

I will surf the Internet for some information about how to deal with relationships.

【句型句式歸納】

What I want to say is that you are likely to be a stranger to them.

With time going by，you can become good friends.

【連貫、高級詞匯升華】

As a matter of fact；Believe it or not；Firstly ...secondly ...finally；Anyway；Newcomer；smooth；unnesessary

14.NMET 2008重慶卷

【精彩句子賞析】

What you should focus the topics of your compositions on is chiefly about the students daily life.

Once you are determined to be a member of us，you can participate in this activity at any time.

【句型句式歸納】

It is many top teachers who will offer practical guidance to you.

【連貫、高級詞匯升華】

Whats more；However；practical guidance；awarded；participate

15.NMET 2008江西卷

【精彩句子賞析】

An English composition contest is planned to be held in our school and it is just around the corner.

My teacher makes some practical suggestions and I adopt them.

【句型句式歸納】

One of the problems that I am in face of is how to make good use of some excellent sentences.

【連貫、高級詞匯升華】

As a result；And；around the corner；adopt；advanced；consulting；grammatical structures；quote；adequately

16.NMET 2008 天津卷

【精彩句子賞析】

She was grateful to me for my kind offer.

No one on the train offered his seat to the old woman willingly.

【句型句式歸納】

I could imagine when my father saw the wonderful presents，how cheerful he was.

No matter who we are，we should have a common sense that we must show respect for the old.

【連貫、高級詞匯升華】

At that time；nevertheless；While after one minute；Undoubtedly；drawing near；joyfully；was grateful to；a common sense ★