李安

Were growing up and we need do something carefully. Now were busy at school. Well study hard to get good grades. Well ask our teachers for help if we have questions in class.

At home, we should help our parents do housework. They go to work during the daytime and they must be tired after a full days work. We should do some housework in order to let them have a rest. When were free, we should talk with them more. In this way, it can help us understand each other better.

Besides these things, we wouldnt throw rubbish everywhere. We should throw it into the dustbin. It can make our environment more beautiful. Dont use plastic bags too often, they will become white pollution.

In a word, if each of us does our part from now on, our world will become a harmonious society.

簡評：本文能夠按照題目要求，展開敘述，內(nèi)容完整、切題。詳細(xì)介紹了作為一名初中生在學(xué)校、在家里應(yīng)該怎樣去做，而且對未來和諧社會寄予希望。作文中運用了study hard, ask for, help ...do，talk with等動詞短語，將身邊事情的處理方式描述得非常詳細(xì)。且結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，語法準(zhǔn)確，體現(xiàn)了作者快樂、健康、向上的積極心態(tài)。

（指導(dǎo)教師：李池紅）

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