洪鋮悅

We have four seasons in a year. I can do many interesting things in each season. In spring， the weather is cool and wind， I can fly kites when it has wind. And I can go hiking with my family when its sunny and cool. I like hiking. Summer is hot in the north of China， but not long time.

I often go swimming. It can make me healthy and strong. I can also wear my beautiful dresses. Fall is a season with harvest. And I can eat delicious fruits in this season. I can watch the leaves fall. Winter comes， its often snowy in winter in my hometown. When it snows， everything is white. We can play with snow and make a snowman， skate and ski. And winter is my favourite season， because of the Spring Festival. I love seasons. I love the nature.

【簡評】這篇短文是描述我的四季，在寫法上，是根據(jù)春、夏、秋、冬四季的更替來寫的，先講明每個(gè)季節(jié)的特征，之后再寫在這個(gè)季節(jié)中的主要活動(dòng)或比較有代表性的活動(dòng)。同時(shí)講一些自己的真實(shí)感受，最后闡述自己最喜歡的季節(jié)。在實(shí)際寫作的時(shí)候，我們還可以先寫出自己喜愛的季節(jié)及主要的活動(dòng)內(nèi)容，之后再去講其他季節(jié)，還可以多講解一下地域的季節(jié)特征和大自然中的其他景色，如：秋天的田地里一片金黃，農(nóng)民在收割等等，這樣寫出來的四季更貼近實(shí)際。這篇習(xí)作講的是我的四季，是比較慣常的一些行為，所以我們最好采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和情態(tài)動(dòng)詞結(jié)合活動(dòng)的寫法。即在什么季節(jié)，天氣如何，我們可以做什么。

指導(dǎo)教師：車宏逸