安徽泗縣一中 吳安運(yùn)
口頭通知一般是由負(fù)責(zé)人口頭傳達(dá),它不如書面通知那么正式。 口頭通知形式簡單,無須告知發(fā)出通知的單位, 直接進(jìn)行敘述即可。正文敘述口語化,簡明扼要。 口頭通知往往以“Attention, please.”“May I have your attention,please?”或“Be quiet, please.”開始,其后可以加上“I have an announcement to make.”;結(jié) 束時可加上“That's all! Thank you.”之類的結(jié)束語。
Dear students,May I have your attention, please?/Attention please, everyone. I have an announcement to make. There will be (介紹活動內(nèi)容). It will (活動的時間、地點(diǎn)等). All (參加人員)are required to attend it. Please come on time and don't be late. I hope (祝愿).That's all. Thank you!→稱呼→開場語→正文(介紹活動內(nèi)容、時間、地點(diǎn)等)→注意事項→結(jié)束語模板范文Dear students,May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make. There will be a film called Little Women at the New Century Cinema tomorrow afternoon. It will begin at 5 pm and will last about two hours and fifteen minutes. All the students in our class are required to attend it. Please come on time. I hope you will enjoy the film.That's all. Thank you.
May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make.
請注意! 我要通知一件事情。
Attention, please! I have something important to tell you.
請注意! 我有重要的事情要告訴你們。
Please be quiet, everyone!
請大家安靜!
Be quiet, please!
請安靜!
Attention, please, everyone.
請大家注意。
Listen, please!
請大家聽一下!
Attention, please, ladies and gentlemen!
女士們、先生們,請注意!
Attention please. I have an announcement to make.
請大家注意,我要宣讀一則通知。
There is something important to tell you.
有個重要的消息要告訴你們。
I have something important to tell you.
我有重要的事情要告訴你們。
Our school has decided to hold an activity to climb Xiangshan Hill this Sunday.
我們學(xué)校決定這周日組織爬香山活動。
It will begin at 5 pm and last about two hours.
它將在下午五點(diǎn)開始,持續(xù)大約兩個小時。
There will colourful activities then, such as singing, dancing, exchanging gifts with one another and so on.
到時會有豐富多彩的活動, 比如唱歌、跳舞、互換禮物等。
All the teachers and students are required to attend it. Please take your notebooks and make notes. Please listen carefully and we'll have a discussion in groups.
所有的老師和學(xué)生都要參加。請帶上筆記本做筆記。請認(rèn)真聽,之后我們會有分組討論。
I think you will enjoy it very much.
我想你會非常喜歡它的。
There's sure to be a lot of fun. Everyone is welcome.
一定會有很多的樂趣。 歡迎大家都來參與。
Good luck.
祝好運(yùn)。
That's all. Thank you.
我的話說完了,謝謝大家。
So much for it. Thank you.
就是這些。 謝謝大家。
你班將于12月31日下午1點(diǎn)在學(xué)校禮堂(auditorium)舉行元旦晚會。 假定你是班長,請你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語在班級QQ群里發(fā)一則通知,布置相關(guān)事宜。
要點(diǎn):
1. 每個同學(xué)準(zhǔn)備一個才藝節(jié)目;
2. 積極參加游戲;
3. 做文明觀眾。
注意:
1. 詞數(shù)100左右;
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;
3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。
Boys and girls,
That's all. Thank you.
【試題解讀】
1. 審題立意
該篇書面表達(dá)采用了應(yīng)用文的考查形式,是提綱類作文。
從提示上看, 試題仍然具有一定的開放性, 給各位考生留出了一定的自由發(fā)揮空間,有利于考生充分展示自己的英語書面表達(dá)能力。這次英語作文試題還是采用了以往的書信形式,試題已經(jīng)給出了開頭和結(jié)尾,考生可以直接按照材料提示的有關(guān)內(nèi)容進(jìn)入主題。
2. 寫作要點(diǎn)
①簡短的寒暄和導(dǎo)入;
②本次群發(fā)通知的主題為“元旦晚會”;
③準(zhǔn)備一個才藝節(jié)目;
④積極參與;
⑤做文明觀眾;
⑥通知結(jié)束語。
3. 注意事項
①注意文章應(yīng)寫成書信體, 而非通知的格式;
②在表達(dá)通知中的時間、地點(diǎn)等時,應(yīng)符合表達(dá)習(xí)慣,特別注意語序。
【佳作賞析】
Boys and girls,
As New Year's Day is coming ①, a party will be held in the school hall at 1 pm on December 31②.
All of us are encouraged to show our talents, so we should prepare a good program in advance. A variety of different programs will be welcomed at this party, such as ③ singing,dancing,English plays and so on.What's more④,we have planned some interesting games and prizes for all, and we sincerely expect everyone to take an active part in them⑤.
Please come here on time, conduct yourself and do keep the auditorium in order while the party is still on⑥.
That's all. Thank you.
亮點(diǎn)分析:本篇習(xí)作思路清唽,細(xì)節(jié)交代得較清楚,總的來說是一篇好文章。
①as引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句,句中短暫動詞的進(jìn)行時is coming即可表示一般將來。
②表示時間的介詞at與on的交替使用,可區(qū)分大小時間點(diǎn)的概念。
③此處用表示列舉的such as更能準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)節(jié)目廣泛的選擇范圍。
④what's more的點(diǎn)綴,更能詳盡地描述活動安排的充分與精彩。
⑤expect sb to do sth句式的表達(dá),恰如其分地反映出組織者的期待和美好愿望。
⑥do keep的強(qiáng)調(diào)與while從句的渲染,更能體現(xiàn)作者作為組織者提出要求的誠懇與嚴(yán)肅。
假定你是校學(xué)生會主席。 新年即將到來,為了幫助你校的外國留學(xué)生更好地了解中國文化,學(xué)生會將為他們舉辦一個新年晚會。 請你根據(jù)以下提示,用英語向他們發(fā)出口頭通知。
時間:下周五晚6:00~8:00
地點(diǎn):教學(xué)樓101室
內(nèi)容:
1. 唱中文歌;
2. 比賽用筷子;
3. 學(xué)習(xí)包餃子。
注意:
1. 詞數(shù)100左右;
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;
3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。
Good afternoon, everyone. May I have your attention, please?
Thank you for your attention.