胡陸璐

My mother looks young.

Her eyes are very big and bright.

Her hair is black and short.

She always wears a pair of glasses.

She likes shopping and cooking.

She cooks nice food for us every day.

She keeps our home clean and tidy.

指導(dǎo)老師 姜琴琴：

孩子們感情真摯、細(xì)膩，于平凡中見真情。作品語言平實(shí)質(zhì)樸，于細(xì)節(jié)中寫出父母對(duì)孩子無私的愛，也表達(dá)了孩子對(duì)父愛和母愛的贊美。主題鮮明，行文流暢。