何映樺
激活·素養(yǎng)解讀
實踐·讀寫整合
Living heritage: Chinese tea
活態(tài)遺產(chǎn):中國茶
Traditional tea processing techniques andassociated social practices in China were officiallyrecognized by the United Nations Educational,Scientific and Cultural Organization (UNESCO) onNovember 29, 2022. The result has been widelyhailed by the Chinese public and experts as a signifi?cant step for conservation and promotion of traditional tea culture.
2 Tea is ubiquitous (似乎無處不在的) in Chinese peoples daily life. Steeped orboiled tea is served in homes, tea houses and restaurants, forming an importantelement of communication in social events and ceremonies such as weddings andsacrifices.
3 Based on natural conditions and local customs, Chinese tea producers have developedsix categories of tea—green, yellow, dark, white, oolong and black teas. Together withreprocessed teas, such as flower?scented tea, there are more than 2,000 tea products. Themost famous are green tea, black tea, oolong tea and flower tea.
4 China's tea culture has nurtured social practices, traditional skills and handcrafts. Itreflects Chinese people's values of modesty, harmony and respect. It also facilitatesexchanges and mutual learning among civilizations connected by the Silk Road,thereby playing a significant role in social development, according to the application.
5 It has been demonstrated that Chinese tea boasts a variety of health benefits. Forexample, Puer tea can wake you up and can remove excess fats in food. Green tea canrefresh your mind and quench (解渴) your thirst.
Activity A Reading for understanding
語篇解碼
(一)主題歸納
What is the text mainly about?
(二)結(jié)構(gòu)分析與信息梳理
Fill in the blanks according to the text with only one word for each blank.
(三)銜接分析
1. 銜接方式一:巧用省略(名詞省略、動詞省略和分句省略)
The most famous are green tea, black tea, oolong tea and flower tea.
【點石成金】此處省略前文提到的categories,該銜接方式使句間連接緊密,語篇更加緊湊。
2. 銜接方式二:巧用指代(人稱代詞、指示代詞、定冠詞+名詞等)
China's tea culture has nurtured social practices, traditional skills and handcrafts. It reflects Chinese people's values of modesty, harmony and respect.
【點石成金】It指代前一句的主語Chinas tea culture,該銜接方式可避免重復(fù),使語言更加簡練。
Activity B Reading for writing
一、詞塊積累
be hailed as 被贊揚為……
conservation 保護
steeped or boiled tea 浸泡或煮沸的茶
flower?scented 花香的
nurture 培養(yǎng);培育
modesty 謙虛;樸素
handcraft 手工藝
facilitate exchanges and mutual learning 促進交流和相互學(xué)習(xí)
civilization 文明
boast 有(值得自豪的東西)
wake sb up 令某人清醒
remove excess fats 去除多余脂肪
refresh ones mind 使某人頭腦清醒
quench ones thirst 解渴
二、典句賞析
現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語
1. Steeped or boiled tea is served in homes, tea houses and restaurants, forming animportant element of communication in social events and ceremonies such as weddings andsacrifices. 浸泡或煮沸的茶常見于家庭、茶館和餐廳,成為婚禮和祭祀等社會活動和儀式的重要的交流元素。
【點石成金】該句中的forming...sacrifices為現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語,其邏輯主語為Steeped or boiled tea,且為主動關(guān)系,闡述茶的常見場所和場合。
2. It also facilitates exchanges and mutual learning among civilizations connected bythe Silk Road, thereby playing a significant role in social development, according to theapplication. 根據(jù)該申請,中國茶文化還促進了由絲綢之路連接起來的各種文明之間的交流和相互學(xué)習(xí),從而在社會發(fā)展中發(fā)揮了重要作用。
【點石成金】該句中的playing...development為現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語,其邏輯主語為It,且為主動關(guān)系,闡述中國茶文化在社會發(fā)展的重要作用。
【例句仿寫】茶文化在社會發(fā)展中發(fā)揮了重要作用,促進了社會和諧和文化交流。
三、寫作遷移
假定你是李華,你的外國朋友Chris發(fā)來郵件說近期在準(zhǔn)備“聯(lián)合國教科文組織世界非物質(zhì)文化遺產(chǎn)”項目,想向你了解中國茶文化。請你介紹中國茶文化,內(nèi)容如下:
1. 中國茶的歷史;
2. 喝茶的場所;
3. 茶的種類和益處。
注意:
1. 詞數(shù)80左右;
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。
Dear Chris,
_______________________
Yours,
Li Hua
寫作導(dǎo)引
激活思維
本次的寫作任務(wù)是寫一封介紹信。在信中,李華需要向外國朋友介紹中國茶文化的相關(guān)常識,如茶的種類、喝茶的場所和好處等。本次寫作主要考查學(xué)生用英語講好非遺文化和弘揚中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化的能力。這些寫作要點和要求與所給語篇的主題語境是緊密相關(guān)的。我們可以通過整合同一主題的閱讀材料的內(nèi)容和語言,梳理寫作思路和積累素材。
素材積累
本文是基于同一主題的語篇閱讀下的寫作,我們可以通過學(xué)習(xí)、模仿并運用閱讀中的語言表達,如詞塊和句型,積累寫作的語言素材。
(一)介紹寫信的原因或目的
1. Learning/Knowing that you are interested in China's tea culture, I am writing tointroduce some basic information about it to you. 得知你對中國的茶文化感興趣,我寫信向你介紹一些相關(guān)基本信息。
2. Learning that you take a great interest in Chinas tea culture, Id like to tell yousomething about it. 得知你對中國的茶文化感興趣,我想告訴你一些關(guān)于它的事情。
3. I'm delighted to know that you are interested in China's tea culture and preparingfor the UNESCO World Intangible Cultural Heritage project. I'm writing to share my under?standing with you. 非常高興得知你對中國茶文化感興趣,并正在為“聯(lián)合國教科文組織世界非物質(zhì)文化遺產(chǎn)”項目做準(zhǔn)備。我寫信與你分享我的理解。
(二)介紹中國茶的起源、特征、功能、價值或用途等
1. With a long history of more than 4,000 years, Chinas tea culture has been hailed asa key part of traditional Chinese culture, which plays a vital role in nurturing culturalexchanges, traditional techniques and handcrafts. 中國茶擁有4,000多年的悠久歷史,被譽為中華傳統(tǒng)文化的重要組成部分,在文化交流、傳統(tǒng)技藝和手工藝的培育上發(fā)揮了重要作用。
2. As part of traditional Chinese culture, Chinas tea culture has a long history of morethan 4,000 years. 作為中華傳統(tǒng)文化的一部分,中國茶文化擁有超過4,000年的歷史。
3. Tea is served in many places such as homes, restaurants or tea houses, facilitatingsocial communication at important events or occasions. 茶在許多地方可見,如家中、餐廳或茶館,能在重要活動或場合促進社會交流。
4. Chinese tea is the embodiment of Chinese peoples values of hospitality and re?spect, which is often used to entertain guests as a sign of welcome. 中國茶體現(xiàn)了中國人好客和尊重他人的價值觀,通常用來招待客人以示歡迎。
5. There are different sorts of tea in China, of which green tea is famous around theworld. 中國有不同種類的茶,其中以綠茶聞名世界。
6. Drinking tea brings numerous benefits, like helping you wake up. 喝茶有很多好處,比如幫助你提神醒腦。
7. As a Chinese, I feel proud of our tea culture and hope that more people willappreciate its charm and significance. 作為中國人,我為中國茶文化感到驕傲,并希望有更多的人能欣賞到它的魅力和懂得它的意義。
(三)表達美好祝愿
1. I hope what Ive written will enable you to learn more about it. 我希望我寫的東西能讓你更多地了解它。
2. I hope my introduction will be of help to you. Best wishes! 我希望我的介紹能對你有所幫助。祝好!
3. I hope what is mentioned above might be helpful to you. Good luck! 我希望上面所提到的內(nèi)容能對你有幫助。祝好運!
4. If you still have any questions, please feel free to ask me. 如果你還有任何問題,請隨時問我。
寫作支架
本次的寫作任務(wù)是寫一封介紹信。根據(jù)任務(wù)中的要求,語篇結(jié)構(gòu)可定為“寫信目的+文化介紹+個人理解+表達祝愿”。文章的框架如下:
Dear Chris,
Learning that you are interested in..., I am writing to..(. 背景介紹+表明目的)
As part of traditional Chinese culture, Chinas tea culture has a long history of morethan 4,000 years. Tea is served in many places such as... Besides, there are various sorts ofChinese tea, of which...is famous around the world. Moreover, Chinese tea boasts numerousbenefits. Not only does it..., but also it helps... As a Chinese, I feel proud of our tea cultureand hope that...(文化介紹+個人理解)
I hope what Ive written will..(. 表達祝愿)
Yours,
Li Hua
語篇過手
根據(jù)以上提供的主題、主題表達和語篇結(jié)構(gòu),寫一封介紹信。第一段表明寫信目的;第二段介紹中國茶文化的歷史,以及喝茶的場所、種類和好處,并表達個人感受;第三段表達個人祝愿??傇~數(shù)控制在80左右。
同時,學(xué)習(xí)運用前文閱讀中出現(xiàn)的現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語。尤其要注意文章的邏輯性和條理性,以及語言的準(zhǔn)確性、流暢性和得體性。