四川 付 利

?文體感知

演講，是指在特定的時空環(huán)境中，公開向聽眾傳遞信息，表述見解，闡明事理，抒發(fā)感情，以達到感召聽眾的目的。根據(jù)不同的目的，演講的風格也不同。通常來講，演講有介紹類、說服類、激勵類、教育類等。一場富有吸引力的演講，不僅可以生動地反映生活，揭示真理，同時還能引起人們共鳴，培養(yǎng)人們美好的道德情操，促進人們奮發(fā)向上，給人以強烈的美的感受。而關于音樂影響力的演講，要著重講述個人經歷和感受，注重語言樸實，感情真實，多站在聽眾的角度考慮，引起他們的共鳴。

一、基本框架

二、素材積累

第一段：開場白（開門見山，略寫）

1.Good morning/afternoon/evening, ladies and gentleman.My name is..., a middle school student from...I'm honored to be here to give a talk on music.

2.Hello, everyone! My name is..., a middle school student from...I'm glad to stand here to share my experience with music.

第二段：正文（具體經歷，寫出起伏，詳寫）

1.experience something unpleasant 經歷一些不愉快的事情

2.suffer (from)...遭受……

3.be faced with 面臨

4.be in trouble with...陷入……的麻煩

5.feel down/depressed/powerless/desperate 感到沮喪/壓抑/無力/絕望

6.empowering lyrics and uplifting messages 有力的歌詞和振奮人心的啟示

7.fuel one's determination 點燃某人的決心

8.provide sb with a healthy emotional outlet 給某人提供一個健康的情緒出口

9.soothing power 安撫的力量

10.slow and soft beat 舒緩的節(jié)奏

11.fast/uplifting tempo 歡快的節(jié)奏

12.harmonic/melodious chorus 悅耳的和聲

13.catchy/penetrating/magnetic voice 悅耳動聽的/有穿透力的/有磁性的嗓音

14.Many empty spaces are specially designed in traditional Chinese music.中國傳統(tǒng)音樂很講究留白。

15.Empty space allows listeners to come into the work, having a dialogue with the player and composer.留白讓聽眾進入作品，和表演者、創(chuàng)作者進行對話。

16.The sounds and pauses ofpipacombine to make a poetry of sound.琵琶的聲音和停頓結合起來，創(chuàng)造出一首聲音的詩。

17.Listeners can experience the power and beauty of music.聽眾能感受到音樂的力量和美。

18.Music has the power to ignite a fire within me, reminding me of my goals and providing the strength to persevere.音樂給了我力量，點燃我內心的激情，提醒我自己的目標，給我堅持下去的力量。

19.It has also provided me with a sense of solace during difficult times, offering comfort and support when I needed it the most.它也在我困難時給予我安慰，在我最需要它的時候安慰我、支持我。

20.Music has been a constant companion, helping me navigate through life's ups and downs.音樂是我忠實的伙伴，幫助我渡過人生的起起伏伏。

21.I have found solace and a means of self-expression through playing and composing music.It allows me to channel my emotions and thoughts into melodies and lyrics, creating a form of outlet.我通過演奏、創(chuàng)作音樂找到了安慰和自我表達的方式。它讓我把自己的情感和思想轉化為曲調和歌詞，成為我一種宣泄的方式。

22.It has also allowed me to explore different genres and experiment with various instruments, expanding my musical repertoire and enhancing my skills.它也讓我去探索不同的音樂類型，實踐不同的樂器，拓展自己的曲目，提升演奏技巧。

第三段：結尾（現(xiàn)狀，略寫）

1.Now, music has had a profound impact on me, motivating my personal development.

如今，音樂已經對我產生了深遠的影響，激勵著我的個人發(fā)展。

2.Music is a powerful language that continues to shape my life in a meaningful way.

音樂是一種有力的語言，持續(xù)以一種有意義的方式塑造著我的生活。

3.Whether I'm seeking relief, inspiration, or simply a means of self-expression, music has always been there, guiding me through the highs and lows of life.無論我是尋求慰藉、靈感，還是一種自我表達方式，音樂總在那里，引導著我渡過人生的起起落落。

?情境呈現(xiàn)

假定你是李華，你校正在舉辦一年一度的音樂節(jié)，活動之一是以“Music and me”為主題的演講。你準備報名參加，請你寫一篇演講稿，內容包括：

1.自我介紹；

2.你的音樂故事；

3.你的感悟。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Good morning,ladies and gentlemen,

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Thank you for your listening!

Step 1 審題

Step 2 詞塊積累

1.share sth with sb 和某人分享某事

2.experience ups and downs 經歷人生的起伏

3.be immersed in...沉浸在……

4.turn to 求助于

5.go rusty 生疏

6.break up with sb 和某人鬧掰

Step 3 關鍵句

1.I was deeply hurt, feeling a sense of betrayal.我深受傷害，有一種被背叛的感覺。

2.Music has had a profound impact on my life, shaping my emotions, memories and even my personal growth.音樂對我的生活有著深遠的影響，它塑造了我的情感、記憶，甚至我的個人成長。

3.The catchy melodies and positive lyrics can energize me and help me see the brighter side of things.動人的樂曲和積極的歌詞讓我精神振奮，幫助我看到事情陽光的一面。

4.Whenever I feel down or stressed, I will turn to my favorite upbeat songs to instantly boost my spirits.每當我感到沮喪或者有壓力時，我就去聽我最喜歡的激昂的音樂來提神。

5.It never fails to refresh me, encouraging me to calmly face whatever life has in store.它總是能讓我神清氣爽，讓我從容面對生活中的一切。

Step 4 連句成篇

【佳作欣賞】

Good morning,ladies and gentlemen,

I'm a middle school student from Hangzhou.It's my honor to stand here to share my story with music.

One year ago, I broke up with my best friend.I was so hurt that I found no way out.One day, quite by accident, I heard a song namedChangebyTaylor Swift.The catchy melodies and positive lyrics immediately energized me, helping me see the brighter side of things.

Since then, whenever I feel down or stressed, I turn to my favorite upbeat songs.They never fail to refresh me, encouraging me to calmly face whatever life has in store.

Thank you for your listening!

?小試牛刀

假定你是李華，你報名參加了學校即將舉行的英語演講比賽?，F(xiàn)在你準備寫一篇演講稿，題目為“Music inspires me”，內容包括：

1.自我介紹；

2.音樂對你的影響；

3.你的心得。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Music inspires me

Good afternoon,ladies and gentlemen,

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Thank you for your listening!