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高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)規(guī)定,考生必須使用過(guò)渡性詞匯來(lái)增強(qiáng)文章的連貫性、邏輯性和情感性,可見(jiàn)能否準(zhǔn)確貼切地使用有情有義、亦真亦誠(chéng)的過(guò)渡性詞匯是高考書(shū)面表達(dá)能否獲得高分的關(guān)鍵。本文從不同體裁的角度談?wù)剷?shū)面表達(dá)過(guò)渡性詞匯的使用方法。
一、記敘文如何使用過(guò)渡性詞匯
眾所周知,記敘文往往以時(shí)間變化、地點(diǎn)變換為敘述線索,因此記敘文過(guò)渡性詞匯的使用也呈現(xiàn)出明顯的時(shí)間性和地點(diǎn)性,請(qǐng)看下表:
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根據(jù)圖示,寫(xiě)一篇短文。要求故事完整,語(yǔ)句通順,內(nèi)容與圖片相符。
提示:圖中學(xué)生名叫林峰字?jǐn)?shù):100左右
just at this time,one morning,then,finally,suddenly
__1__Lin Feng saw a blind man walking across the street on his way to school.
__2__a car was going to hit him.__3__, Lin Feng ran up to him and pulled him back. The man was saved.__4__Lin Feng took him to the other side of the street. The man thanked him for his help. But Lin Feng didnt wait for his thanks. He went to school at once. It was late and the first class had been on.
The teacher was very angry, so Lin Feng told him what had happened.__5__the teacher was satisfied with him. “Youve done a good deed,” said the teacher with a smile on his face.
1. One morning2. Suddenly3. Just at this time4. Then5. Finally
二、現(xiàn)象評(píng)論文如何使用過(guò)渡性詞匯
現(xiàn)象評(píng)論文往往介紹人們對(duì)某一社會(huì)現(xiàn)象褒貶不一的看法以及寫(xiě)作者自己的觀點(diǎn),因此過(guò)渡性詞匯的使用隨著寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容的不同而有所變化,請(qǐng)看下表:
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最近甘肅一位28歲的女子因瘋狂追星迫使父親自殺,這件事在廣大青少年中引起了強(qiáng)烈反響,人們對(duì)追星發(fā)表了不同的看法。閱讀下表內(nèi)容,寫(xiě)一篇短文介紹這些看法,并發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。
字?jǐn)?shù):120左右參考詞匯:追星be obsessed with stars
as a result,at the same time,in the opinion of me,however,as you can imagine
Recently, in Gansu Province, a 28-year-old womans father killed himself because of her being obsessed with stars, which arouse teens heated discussion.__1__, different students have different opinions about it.
Some think it is very normal to like stars, which can make teens better understand stars and learn from them to develop faster.
__2__, some think that those obsessed with stars are usually lost in their crazy actions and cant get rid of them.__3__, much time and money is wasted and even a happy family will be destroyed. __4__, it is normal to like a star but we cant go too far. We shouldnt let our actions influence our study and life. We cant copy stars in everything, and__5__we should develop an independent personality.
1. As you can imagine2. However3. As a result 4. In the opinion of me5. what is more important
三、問(wèn)題介紹文如何使用過(guò)渡性詞匯
問(wèn)題介紹文往往介紹問(wèn)題產(chǎn)生的原因、結(jié)果及解決問(wèn)題的建議,因此過(guò)渡性詞匯的使用隨著這些內(nèi)容的變化而有所不同,請(qǐng)看下表:
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目前中學(xué)生煙民越來(lái)越多,閱讀下表內(nèi)容,寫(xiě)一篇短文介紹這一現(xiàn)象并發(fā)表自己的看法,提出解決問(wèn)題的方法。
first,as we laa know,in my opinion,at the same time,besides,as you can imagine,whtat's worse,as a result of
Now, more and more students are learning to smoke, and there are many reasons for it.
__1__, middle school students always have strong pressure from study and__2__this, many learn to smoke to release their pressure.__3__, many students learn from stars to smoke so that they can show their unique style.
It is know to all that smoking does great harm to us.__4__ , smoking is bad to our health and often causes fatal illnesses. In the meanwhile, smoking costs us much money and increases the load of our life.__5__, smoking often causes big fires, which usually lead to a great loss.
__6__, smoking is really a bad thing. We should realize the harm of it and try to get rid of the habit.__7__, we should form other good habits.
If so, we can get rid of the bad habit of smoking.
1. As we all know2. as a result of3. At the same time4. First5. Whats worse6. In my opinion7. Besides
四、數(shù)據(jù)式圖表作文如何使用過(guò)渡性詞匯
數(shù)據(jù)式圖表作文往往是通過(guò)數(shù)據(jù)介紹來(lái)說(shuō)明道理的,因此其過(guò)渡性詞匯的使用隨著語(yǔ)境邏輯的變化而有所不同,請(qǐng)看下表:
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根據(jù)下面圖表,以“Fire Causes”為標(biāo)題,寫(xiě)一篇議論文,要點(diǎn)包括:火災(zāi)原因,各類火災(zāi)的比例,火災(zāi)給人們的啟示。
2006年某市火災(zāi)事故發(fā)生原因圖表(graph)
of course,as we laa know,at the same time,therefore,as you can imagine
Fire Causes
__1__, fire, one of the most terrible killers in our modern society can be caused by many factors.__2__, it is mainly caused by smokers, as can be seen from the graph. In 2006, thousands of fires happened in the city. About 50% of them were caused by smokers who left cigarette-ends everywhere. 30% were caused by defective insulation and 20% by children playing with matches. No matter what type of fire it was, there was one thing in common: carelessness.__3__we should warn children of the dangers of playing with matches.__4__, workers should know the importance of good insulation to peoples lives.__5__smoking should not be allowed in public places.
1. As we all know2. As you can imagine3. Therefore4. At the same time5. Of course