楊宇寧

要求：你的未來(lái)生活會(huì)是什么樣？你將來(lái)想要從事什么職業(yè)？請(qǐng)以My Life in the Future為題，描述一下你未來(lái)的工作和生活。

In the future， I think I will be a teacher. I will teach in the countryside. Because the kids there are very poor， I want to help them get better education.

As a teacher， I think I will try my best to teach them well. I will help them to open their eyes and know more about the world. I will also be friendly with them. And I will be their best friend. After class， we will play games together.

In my free time， I will go for a walk around the country. I will enjoy fresh air and the beauty of the countryside. On holidays， I will travel around the world. And I will buy some gifts for my students. This is my dream life in the future. I hope it will come ture.

簡(jiǎn)評(píng)：文章開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題說(shuō)明自己所從事的職業(yè)是什么。作者想象力豐富，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確，整篇文章運(yùn)用將來(lái)時(shí)來(lái)描述自己未來(lái)的工作及生活。句式運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確，整篇文章除簡(jiǎn)單句和并列句外，作者還準(zhǔn)確地運(yùn)用賓語(yǔ)從句來(lái)表達(dá)自己的想法。

（指導(dǎo)教師：馬艷紅 ）