孫玉欣

Today is Monday. I have six classes.

In the morning, I usually ride my bike to school. It takes about fifteen minutes. Then I have an English class. Its my favorite subject. We must do morning exercise after two classes.

At twelve oclock, I eat a healthy lunch in the dining hall.

In the afternoon, I often have two classes. And I like PE lesson best.

After school, I go home with my best friends. Then I do my homework, I think doing homework is very interesting. When I finish my homework, I must clean my room...And I usually eat dinner at six oclock. At nine thirty in the evening, I must brush my teeth and go to bed.

This is my day. Its a busy day, but I feel happy.

簡(jiǎn)評(píng)：習(xí)作記敘了自己一天的學(xué)校生活，運(yùn)用了七年級(jí)下前3個(gè)單元的知識(shí)要點(diǎn)，包含了交通方式、花費(fèi)時(shí)間、具體時(shí)間表達(dá)法、頻率副詞等，語言精練，情感真摯。結(jié)尾處表達(dá)了學(xué)校生活繁忙又快樂的心情。

（指導(dǎo)教師：那莎）