孫千晴

一年有四個(gè)季節(jié)，春、夏、秋、冬，我們可以享受四季帶給我們的不同快樂(lè)。請(qǐng)以“My Favorite Season”為題，談?wù)勀阕钕矚g的季節(jié)是什么，并講出原因。

要求：1.寫(xiě)出結(jié)構(gòu)完整、內(nèi)容充實(shí)、意思連貫、語(yǔ)法準(zhǔn)確、語(yǔ)言豐富優(yōu)美、可讀性強(qiáng)的短文。2. 至少60詞。

There are four seasons in a year. Anyway， my favorite season is spring.

As the saying goes， “A years plan starts with spring.”In the fields， everything begins to grow. Trees turn green， and flowers start to come out. In spring， people take off their heavy clothes and enjoy the warmness and sunshine. Many people love this season of year， because it is good for sports. We can go hiking during this season. Also， we can go on a picnic with our friends. We have colorful view from here and there.

These are the reasons why I like spring. Spring gives us a lot of fun and pleasure.

【簡(jiǎn)評(píng)】本文出自一名七年級(jí)學(xué)生之手，寫(xiě)作思路清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，首尾段呼應(yīng)主題。中間段介紹春季，語(yǔ)句優(yōu)美，季節(jié)特點(diǎn)抓得準(zhǔn)，描寫(xiě)細(xì)致。能恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞語(yǔ)，語(yǔ)句連接緊密，是一篇優(yōu)秀的學(xué)生習(xí)作。

指導(dǎo)教師：田卓