蘇紅雪

My hometown is a beautiful small village. Though all the seasons are beautiful， I like spring best.

After the snow melts， the swallows fly back and the willows sprout. We know that spring is coming. All the trees become green and the mountains are covered with green grass and many kinds of beautiful flowers. What colorful pictures！ My friends and I will run about all day， climb the mountains， and jump from one rock to another. Sometimes we will play near the river. We sing and dance happily， we all enjoy ourselves there.

I like the spring in my hometown.

【簡評】全文用詞較為考究，句式結構富于變化，行文流暢。小作者通過孩童們的嬉戲來描寫春天也是別有一番景致。

指導教師：康軼菲