田悅

Last Saturday， I had a school trip with my classmates. We went to a farm in the countryside. We fed sheep and chickens there. And we helped the farmers pick some apples and other fruits. After lunch， we climbed the hill near the farm. There are some beautiful flowers on the hill. we took a lot of photos. We talked with the farmers and learned a lot about farming. We felt happy but tired. It was a great day！

【簡(jiǎn)評(píng)】這篇學(xué)生習(xí)作是學(xué)習(xí)完一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)后，學(xué)生記敘了一次學(xué)校郊游的過(guò)程，其中運(yùn)用了課本中出現(xiàn)的多個(gè)重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)，達(dá)到了活學(xué)活用，學(xué)以致用的學(xué)習(xí)效果！

指導(dǎo)教師：那莎