陳煜

一、文體概述

祝賀/祝福信是指在日常生活中，你得知同學(xué)或朋友考試取得好成績(jī)、競(jìng)賽獲獎(jiǎng)、考上大學(xué)等或過(guò)新年、重大及特殊節(jié)日時(shí)，給對(duì)方祝賀/祝福的信件。寫(xiě)信的語(yǔ)言應(yīng)做到真誠(chéng)、自然和親切。通常包括以下內(nèi)容：說(shuō)明事由并表明自己的衷心祝賀→展開(kāi)評(píng)論事件，贊揚(yáng)被祝賀人過(guò)去的努力及優(yōu)點(diǎn)等→表達(dá)自己的祝愿。

二、必備短語(yǔ)

1. Congratulations on... 恭喜/祝賀……

2. come true 實(shí)現(xiàn)/成真

3. be delighted to learn that... 很高興得知……

4. express my congratulations on... 表達(dá)我對(duì)……的祝賀

5. feel very happy for you（r）... 為你……感到非常高興

6. quite an exciting news 相當(dāng)令人振奮的消息

7. owing to... 因?yàn)椤?/p>

8. You deserve it. 這是你實(shí)至名歸。

9. achieve the goal實(shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)

10. win the first place 贏得第一名

三、套用句式

1. Its wonderful to know that you have achieved the goal you set for yourself.知道你實(shí)現(xiàn)了自己定下的目標(biāo)，真是太好了。

2. It is the most joyful news I have heard for a long time.這是很久以來(lái)我聽(tīng)過(guò)的最令人興奮的消息。

3. I am delighted to learn that you have won the first place in the English speech contest.獲知你在英語(yǔ)演講比賽中榮獲第一名我很開(kāi)心。

4. I am writing to express my congratulations on your success in the National College Entrance Examination.我寫(xiě)這封信是為了表達(dá)我對(duì)你高考獲勝的祝賀。

5. I wish you all possible joy and happiness in the world. 祝你開(kāi)心幸福。

四、習(xí)作修改 下列習(xí)作中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句最多兩處，請(qǐng)改正。

Dear Sir/Madam，

Greetings from China！

Im Li Hua， a student in Sichuan. Ive been a panda lover when I was a child. About three years ago I am delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth for her daughter Sulin and Ive been watched her grow on your website. Now that shes going to be three. Id like to wish him a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard works， because which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and health life in the US.

By the way， could I have a photo of Sulin taking on her third birthday？ Thank you very much in advance.

Yours truly，

Li Hua

五、課堂練習(xí)

假設(shè)你是李華，來(lái)自美國(guó)的交流生Peter 在你班學(xué)習(xí)半年，與你成為了好朋友。目前，他即將學(xué)成回國(guó)，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他寫(xiě)一篇臨別留言。要點(diǎn)包括：

1. 祝賀Peter學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)取得的成績(jī)；

2. 取得成績(jī)的原因；

3. 你們的友誼和對(duì)他的祝愿。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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六、課外作業(yè)

假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Peter給你發(fā)來(lái)一封郵件，告訴你他被推選為學(xué)?；@球隊(duì)隊(duì)長(zhǎng)。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他回一封郵件。要點(diǎn)包括：

1. 對(duì)他表示祝賀；

2. 你對(duì)此事的看法；

3. 對(duì)他的祝愿。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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參考答案與范文

習(xí)作修改

本篇是熊貓愛(ài)好者李華，給遠(yuǎn)在美國(guó)的大熊貓一家寫(xiě)的祝福信。

1. when→since 主句出現(xiàn)了現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)，應(yīng)將when改成since，表示“自從我小時(shí)候”起持續(xù)到現(xiàn)在。

2. am→was 由three years ago可知，用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。

3. for→to 表示“分娩，生產(chǎn)”，為give birth to。

4. watched→watching 因watch這個(gè)動(dòng)作是由主語(yǔ)I發(fā)出，故改watched為watching。

5. that 意思是“她”現(xiàn)在將三歲，而非“既然”她將三歲，故去掉that。

6. him→her 上文熊貓是用she代替，上下文應(yīng)指代一致。

7. works→work 表示“工作”，work為不可數(shù)名詞，用原形。

8. because 后加of 引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，which指代的是hard work，為名詞，應(yīng)該用because of。

9. health→healthy 修飾名詞life應(yīng)用形容詞。

10. taking→taken 此處take與photo是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，應(yīng)用過(guò)去分詞形式。

課堂練習(xí)

Dear Peter，

I feel delighted that you have achieved your goal. I would like to express my congratulations on your achievement.

It is excellent of you to get such a high mark in the Chinese test， for after all you have just been staying with us for only six months. You are always diligent and active， which is vital for Chinese learning. Moreover， your great interest in reading enables you to have a good memory for Chinese characters. So you deserve it.

Still I know its time for us to say goodbye. I will recall those beautiful days we spend together and help each other. I have thousands of blessings for you. Wish you all possible joy！

Yours truly，

Li Hua

課外作業(yè)

Dear Peter，

I am much delighted to learn that you have been elected the leader of your school basketball team. This is a special and happy moment for you and I am very proud of you. Please accept my most sincere congratulations！

As we all know， the leader plays an important role in the basketball team. Leading such a team， youll meet great challenges. But I think you can manage them， because you are not only hard-working but also you have a strong sense of responsibility. I believe this position will be a new beginning， and a chance for you to achieve more.

May all your wishes come true！

Yours truly，

Li Hua

責(zé)任編輯 蔣小青