陜西省西安市高陵區(qū)崇皇中學(xué)七年級三班 于思航

About the picture: There is a deer in the picture. The deer plays in the forest all day. It’s getting dark. The deer is on his way home. There is a river in front of him. He runs across the bridge. His home is near the river. Then he can meet his parents. They will have a happy Christmas!

I’m a junior high school student. I live with my grandparents. My mother is a worker. She works in a factory far away from my home. My father is a teacher of English.He works in a primary school in another town. On Christmas day in 2017, I couldn’t meet my parents. So I drew this picture. But the winter holiday is coming. I hope I can stay with my parents in a small house. We’ll have a happy winter holiday.

宋軍良老師點評：

小小的一幅畫作，體現(xiàn)了小作者對家人的思念之情，也反映了目前中國社會留守兒童的問題。此畫作于去年圣誕節(jié)前夕。作者首先描述了畫面，然后簡要介紹了自己的情況以及畫作想要表達(dá)的情緒，思路清晰，語言簡潔。