江蘇省興化市大垛中心校 九年級(jí)（2）班 邱麗柔

Summer vacation is coming.I have made some plans about it.

During the vacation，I will make sure that the diet is regular and suitable.And I will keep exercising for about half an hour every day.I think they will be good for my health.Besides,I want to preview what we are going to learn.Preview can make us feel relaxed when we learn new knowledge.And preview can also improve our self-study ability.After finishing studying,I will also go somewhere interesting.I think visiting some places of interest can open up our eyes and increase our knowledge level.

What do you think of my summer vacation plan?

教師點(diǎn)評(píng)：

這是一篇學(xué)生介紹自己暑假計(jì)劃的習(xí)作。作者從健康飲食與運(yùn)動(dòng)、預(yù)習(xí)新課、參觀名勝三個(gè)方面具體介紹了她的暑假安排。全文層次清晰，用詞準(zhǔn)確，語句通順，關(guān)聯(lián)詞及復(fù)合句、祈使句的使用體現(xiàn)了作者扎實(shí)的語言功底。

（指導(dǎo)教師：趙耀衛(wèi)）