石曉娜 鄧中南

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文，每篇作文中有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)詞下畫(huà)一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Li Hua is the student of middle school，which likes sharing his stories. This is one of his stories. One day，Li Huas father was cutting up carrot in the kitchen when his son entered into it. Interrupted by his crying，her father asked，“Whats the matter，my honey？”“I am cut up by the result of my examination，”answers Li Hua. “I assume that you didnt work hard and it is no use ?cry over the spilt milk. You have no alternative but work hardly，” his father comforted him.

I was born in a peacefully village where my primary school was found. I will never forget ?the first day which I went to school. My teacher Mr Green tells me that，“If you dont want to be out of the work in the future，you must work hard！” I didnt mean to work hard， I stayed at home watching TV about violence，which meaned waste time and youth. However，Mr Green always helped me with my study and she was generous with his time，to which I was grateful. So I devoted myself to studying all day. Day by day，I had reached a stage where no one could equal me in all the subject.

Have you ever dreamed of perform in front of thousand of people in the form of singing and dancing and pretended that you are a famous star like Liu Huan or Song Zuying？ Honest， being famous star can earn a lot of money. So，not every one can become a famous ?star，that depends on talent and efforts. So stop by day dreaming！ As Thomas Carlyle once said，“Our main business are not to see what lies dimly at a distance but to do what lies clearly at hand.” I ?attached much importance to studying hard. Work hard，or his dream will break up someday.

Li Hua and his beautiful wife were sleeping while they heard a noise. They find their house was in fire. Fortunate，having learned some knowledges of first aid，they were safe. But their house was burnt to the ground. They decided to made their way to Beijing. He found a job in a big company what has pieces scientific equipment and whose workers were from all over the world. Soon Li Hua was appointed as a manager. To Li Huas delight，her wife gave birth a handsome boy. It is said that they lead a happy life. Best wishes for them.

One day， my classmates and I worked as volunteer. We went to a special school，which all the students were disabled. Excited and nervous，we taught themselves Chinese literature. They listened us so carefully that we almost forget to rest. After class，we played games with them happy on the playground. When leaving for home，we donated some books that we had been bought at a local bookstore. To my surprise， the boy showed me a box as a gift. I was about to open it while he stopped me， asking me to do it after return home. Guess what？ It was a drawing of me speaking before the class！

答案：Ⅰ. 第一句中the改為a，which改為who。第三句中carrot改為carrots，into 去掉。第四句中her改為his。第五句中answers改為answered。第六句中it is no use 前的 and改為but，cry改為crying。接下來(lái)一句中but 與 work 之間加to，hardly改為hard。

Ⅱ.第一句中peacefully改為peaceful，found改為founded。第二句中which改為when。第三句中tells改為told，out of the work的the去掉。第四句中在I stayed at home之前加and，waste改為wasting。第五句中she改為he，to改成for。第七句中subject改為subjects。

Ⅲ . 第一句中perform 改為performing，thousand改為thousands。第二句中Honest改為Honestly，being后加a。第三句中So改為However，that改為which。第四句中by去掉。第五句中are改為is。第六句中attached改為attach。第七句中his改為your。

Ⅳ . 第一句中while 改為when。第二句中find 改為found，in改為on。第三句中Fortunate改為Fortunately，knowledges改為knowledge。第五句中made改為make。第六句中what改為that或which。第七句中manager前的a 去掉。第八句中her改為his，birth后加to。

Ⅴ. 第一句中volunteer改為volunteers。第二句中 which改為where或in which。第三句中 themselves改為them。第四句 listen后面加to， forget改為forgot。第五句中 happy改為happily。第六句中的 been去掉。第七句中the改為a。第八句中while改為when，return改為returning。

（責(zé)任編校 周丹）