黃志芳 張家驥

【Abstract】People have neglected the Chinese classical drama translation for a long time. There are very few related research results about it. Thus， the author intends to take the skopos theory as the theoretical basis to make the comparative analysis of three English versions of The Peony Pavilion translated by Wang Rongpei， Zhang Guangqian and Cyril Birch respectively.

【Key words】Chinese classical drama translation; the skopos theory; The Peony Pavilion; translation strategies

【作者簡(jiǎn)介】黃志芳，張家驥，東華理工大學(xué)。

Chinese classical drama translation already has a history of 270 years. As early as 1736， Ji Junxiang’s The Orphan of Chao was first translated into English. Now， many translated works have aroused strong repercussions at home and abroad. This essay intends to take the skopos theory as the theoretical basis of the research and choose three English versions of The Peony Pavilion as materials to make the comparative study from the aspects of substitute words， numbers and appellation. These three English versions were separately translated by Cyril Birch， Zhang Guangqian and Wang Rongpei.

1. Numbers

The use of numbers is very unique in Chinese traditional culture. Usually， the numbers are used to express the fuzzy concepts， such words as“百”、“千”、“萬” express the concept of being too many. For example， “百歲”represents longevity.

Example 2：The sentence from the 3rd scene：

爹娘萬福，女孩兒無限歡娛。坐黃堂百歲春光，進(jìn)美酒一家天祿。

Wang’s version：? With bliss on you， my dad and mom， That is where all my joy comes from. With everlasting spring air in the hall， You drink the wine and bring joy to all.

Zhang’s version： Boundless happiness to my parents dear， Your happiness is my greatest cheer. May your office shine a hundred springs; Good wine will promote a harmonious home.

Birch’s version： Blessings on you， my parents， For boundless joy to your daughter given. May a hundred springs brighten the Prefect’s hall. And this wine be “Heaven’s reward” to our family.

In this example， three professors translated萬福 into bliss， boundless happiness and blessings respectively. They all adopted free translation and express the fuzziness of number. These three translations of 萬福? obey the coherence rule， but disobey the fidelity rule. 百歲was translated into everlasting spring and a hundred springs respectively. Actually translation of 百歲into everlasting spring is correct， obeying the coherence rule in spite of disobeying the fidelity rule. But translation of百歲into a hundred springs does not show the fuzzy concept of number in the source text although it represents the numerical form of the source text.

2. Appellation

In the feudal society， we often take people’s official position， occupation and identity as people’s appellations such as杜太守、秀才、狀元郎、店小二、黃門等. It is difficult to find the corresponding concepts in the English culture.

the Chinese culturally-loaded word 狀元was translated into Number-one Scholar， Zhuangyuan and Prize Candidate respectively. Wang’s version shows the main meaning of狀元 in Chinese culture vividly. Zhang’s version can show the real cultural connotation of Chinese traditional culture but is obscure to the target readers without annotation. So his translation does not obey the coherence rule of skopos theory. Birch’s translation does not show the main meaning of狀元in Chinese culture. So his translation obeys the coherence rule of skopos theory， but disobeys the fidelity rule of skopos theory.

By the comparative analysis of translation strategies of three English versions of The Peony Paviion， the author gets two following findings： compared with the other two versions， generally professor Wang’s version is superior to the other two versions. As the Chinese famous translator Guo Zhuzhang says， “Professor Wang’s translation version of The Peony Pavilion is the most satisfying English version until now and professor Wang’s translation realizes his goal of vividness and faithfulness.”（Guo， 2002 （8）： 56）

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