徐和辰

I have two friends.

One is John and the other is Cherry.

John is a boy.

He is six years old.

He has a cute round face.

I often play games with him.

Cherry has yellow hair and sparkling eyes.

Cherry likes eating bones.

Can you guess what Cherry is？

She is my lovely pet dog.

I have great fun with John and Cherry.

指導(dǎo)老師 潘展蓉：

孩子們能抓住所寫人物或事物的特點，并將自己與家人或朋友的故事寫出來，字里行間中充溢著一份對家人、朋友的喜愛之情。行文流暢，語言生動，富有童趣。