廣東 王 思

激活·素養(yǎng)解讀

一級目標二級目標語言能力文化意識思維品質(zhì)學習能力1.掌握志愿活動的內(nèi)容與意義的語言表達；2.運用with的復合結(jié)構(gòu)、同位語和定語從句寫倡議信。1.了解世界上很多地方依然很落后，從而懂得同情，學會分享；2.弘揚“奉獻、友愛、互助、進步”的志愿服務(wù)精神。1.掌握語篇段落之間以及段落內(nèi)的邏輯關(guān)系；2.培養(yǎng)梳理、概括信息的思維品質(zhì)，并能對志愿活動創(chuàng)造性地表達自己的觀點。能夠從閱讀文本中提取寫作的素材，如語言、內(nèi)容等，并形成寫作的支架。

實踐·讀寫整合

Travel as a volunteer

以志愿者身份旅行

1Volunteering is hardly a new thing for college students. But how about volunteering in Africa? Of course this conjures up (使聯(lián)想到) stereotypes such as shabby accommodation,unmade roads,malaria and huge expense.

2With young Chinese's horizons expanding thanks to the country's deepening integration with the international community, volunteer work in Africa is gaining momentum (動力).According to Guangzhou Association of Youth Volunteers, during a recruitment drive in March more than 650 students applied for 18 volunteer jobs in the Republic of Seychelles in Africa.“The number of college students applying to do volunteer work in Africa has increased over the years,”said Yang Guang, a staff member of the Wuhan Youth League Committee. For Chinese volunteers, their African experience can be rewarding.

3Pan Di, a 25-year-old from Tianjin Foreign Studies University, went to Kenya two years ago as a volunteer English teacher in a ghetto (貧民區(qū)) in Nairobi, the capital.It was a community of half a million poverty-stricken people.Pan was robbed upon her arrival. Verbal abuse to foreigners was not unusual. Living conditions were even worse than she had imagined. Pan admitted she felt frustrated and disappointed.“But my experiences there taught me to remain calm and collected in the face of adversity or even mistreatment.Now I'm more open-minded,”said Pan.

4Li Chen, a Shandong University graduate, found his experience of volunteer work in Africa more substantial. He did volunteer work as a publicist for AIDS/HIV in Tanzania last year. Li, 23, made new friends from Canada and the US. They are veteran volunteers who travel around the world working with international organizations and groups. One of them recommended Li to a Guangzhou-based NGO as an intern and Li was later offered a full-time job there.“International organizations and NGOs of every kind have a presence in Africa.It is a place to form a network that would help your career in a related field,”said Li.

5Zhang Qi, head of Sunshine Volunteer Group, based in Beijing, agrees that volunteering in Africa can be rewarding. He encourages more students to think out of the box and to broaden their horizons in order to cope with China's international role.“Many college students are either too busy studying or too confined to campus life to explore the world,”said Zhang.“Traveling abroad as a volunteer is one of the best ways to open one's eyes.”

Activity A Reading for understanding

語篇解碼

（一）主題歸納

What is the text mainly about?

（二）結(jié)構(gòu)分析與信息梳理

Fill in the blanks according to the text with only one word for each blank.

_____________________________________________________________________________________________Travel_as_a_volunteer Background information The number of college students applying to do volunteer work in Africa has______________________1._________________________________________________________________over_the_years.Pan Di worked as a volunteer English 2.______in a ghetto in Nairobi.It was a 3.______of half a million poverty-stricken people.Pan Di's experience in Kenya Pan was robbed upon her arrival.Verbal abuse to foreigners was not unusual.Pan felt frustrated and 4.______.She learned to remain 5.______and collected in the face of adversity.______He did volunteer work as a 6.______in Tanzania last year.Li Chen's experience in Africa One of the volunteers 7.______Li to a Guangzhou-based NGO as an intern.Africa is a place to form a 8.______that would help your career in a related field.Zhang Qi is the 9.______of Sunshine Volunteer Group.Zhang Qi's view on volunteering in Africa He encourages more students to think out of the box and to broaden their horizons.______________________Traveling abroad as a 10.______is one of the best wa_______________ys_to_open_one's_eyes.

Activity B Reading for writing

一、詞塊積累

shabby accommodation 破舊不堪的住所

international community 國際社會

apply for 18 volunteer jobs 申請18份志愿工作

apply to do volunteer work 申請參加志愿工作

poverty-stricken people 貧民

feel frustrated and disappointed 感到沮喪和失望

in the face of adversity 面對困境

do volunteer work as a publicist 作為宣傳人員從事志愿工作

make new friends 交新朋友

broaden one's horizons 開闊某人的視野

open one's eyes 拓寬某人的視野

international role 國際角色

explore the world 探索世界

work with international organizations and groups 與一些國際組織和團體合作

二、典句賞析

1.with的復合結(jié)構(gòu)

With young Chinese's horizons expanding thanks to the country's deepening integration with the international community, volunteer work in Africa is gaining momentum.（Para.2）隨著中國同國際社會的不斷融合，中國青年一代的視野也變得開闊起來，在非洲的志愿工作也在不斷發(fā)展壯大。

【點石成金】該句用了一個“with+名詞+現(xiàn)在分詞”的復合結(jié)構(gòu)，表示謂語動作發(fā)生的原因。其中，horizons與expanding之間屬于邏輯上的主謂關(guān)系。

【例句仿寫】隨著志愿者精神在人們中傳播，越來越多的人愿意成為志愿者。

2.同位語

Pan Di, a 25-year-old from Tianjin Foreign Studies University, went to Kenya two years ago as a volunteer English teacher in a ghetto in Nairobi,the capital.（Para.3）25 歲的潘迪（音譯）來自天津外國語大學，她兩年前曾以志愿者的身份前往肯尼亞首都內(nèi)羅畢的貧民區(qū)做一名英語老師。

【點石成金】a 25-year-old from Tianjin Foreign Studies University 在句中作同位語，補充說明Pan Di的身份。當同位語與所修飾的詞關(guān)系緊密時，不用逗號隔開；當同位語對其所修飾的詞只作補充解釋時，可用逗號隔開。此句中的同位語只是對前面Pan Di的補充解釋，因此用逗號隔開。

【例句仿寫】我是李華，是青年志愿者協(xié)會的會長。

3.定語從句

It is a place to form a network that would help your career in a related field.（Para. 4）那里是一個建立關(guān)系網(wǎng)的地方，這個關(guān)系網(wǎng)將對你在相關(guān)領(lǐng)域的職業(yè)發(fā)展有所幫助。

【點石成金】該句使用了一個定語從句that would help your career in a related field，對先行詞a network 進行限定。其中，that 是關(guān)系詞，在從句中充當主語（這里也可以用which替換）。

【例句仿寫】我現(xiàn)在寫信招募志愿者來幫助那些生活在貧困地區(qū)的人。

三、寫作遷移

假定你是李華，是青年志愿者協(xié)會（Youth Volunteer Association）的會長。寒假就要來臨，協(xié)會計劃組織學生前往貧困地區(qū)進行志愿服務(wù)。請你代表協(xié)會起草一份倡議書，號召大家積極參加此次活動。內(nèi)容包括：

1.此次志愿服務(wù)的內(nèi)容；

2.此次活動的意義；

3.號召大家積極參與。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.至少需要使用一個本文中解析過的句式；

4.注意段落內(nèi)的邏輯關(guān)系。

Dear fellow students,

Youth Volunteer Association

寫作導引

?激活思維

本次寫作任務(wù)是寫一份倡議書。我們需要代表青年志愿者協(xié)會向全校學生簡單、清晰地介紹此次志愿服務(wù)的內(nèi)容，以及參加此次活動的意義，并號召大家積極參與。題目要求我們在寫作時使用with 的復合結(jié)構(gòu)、同位語或定語從句。這些寫作要求與所給語篇的主題語境是緊密相關(guān)的。我們可以通過整合同一主題的閱讀材料的內(nèi)容和語言，梳理寫作思路和積累素材。

?素材積累

本次寫作任務(wù)是基于同一主題的語篇閱讀的寫作，我們可以通過學習、模仿并運用閱讀中的語言表達，如詞塊和句型，積累寫作的語言素材。

（一）發(fā)出倡議的背景、原因或目的

1. With the winter vacation drawing near, we are planning to do something to help people in need.隨著寒假的來臨，我們計劃做些事情來幫助有困難的人。

2. Nowadays, an increasing number of people are willing to serve as volunteers,especially university students.如今，越來越多的人樂意做志愿者，特別是大學生們。

3. Aiming to help those in need, I am writing this letter to recruit volunteers who are willing to make contributions to society.為了幫助有困難的人，我現(xiàn)在寫信招募樂意為社會做貢獻的志愿者。

（二）活動的具體內(nèi)容和意義

1. Some volunteers are going to take care of people who are sick and old, while others will tell stories to children to cheer them up.有些志愿者將照顧病人和老人，而其他人將給孩子們講故事，讓他們高興。

2.Not only can we donate daily necessities,but we can offer medical help and psychological help to the area.我們不僅可以給這個地區(qū)捐贈日用品，還可以提供醫(yī)療幫助和心理援助。

3. Volunteering actions are of tremendous benefits to both those in need and society.志愿行動對那些有困難的人和社會都有著巨大的好處。

4. Getting involved in volunteering, volunteers will be exposed to a new environment,which provides them with an opportunity to explore the world.參加志愿服務(wù)的時候，志愿者們會面對新的環(huán)境，這給他們探索世界提供了機會。

5. Not only can the experience open our eyes, but it can improve our organizational ability.這次經(jīng)歷不僅能拓展我們的視野，還能提高我們的組織能力。

6. Through the experience, I have learned to remain calm and collected in the face of adversity.通過這次經(jīng)歷，我學會了在面對困境的時候保持冷靜和鎮(zhèn)定。

（三）倡議者的決心和希望

1. Hopefully you will join in the action and extend warm help to those needy persons.希望你會參與行動，并把溫暖的幫助傳遞給那些貧困的人。

2. With our joint efforts, I'm convinced that we can make a difference to others. 在我們的共同努力下，我相信我們會對其他人有影響。

3.Let's join our hands and take action in no time.讓我們攜起手來，立即采取行動。

?寫作支架

本次寫作任務(wù)是寫一份倡議書，根據(jù)任務(wù)中的要求，語篇結(jié)構(gòu)可定為“發(fā)出倡議的背景或原因+志愿服務(wù)的內(nèi)容和意義+號召大家積極參與”。文章的框架如下：

Dear fellow students,

I am Li Hua, president of the Youth Volunteer Association. With the volunteering spirit spreading among...,more and more people are willing to...(發(fā)出倡議的背景或原因)

Since the winter vacation is around the corner, we are writing this letter to recruit volunteers to help people who... We are going to help them... Through this experience, not only can we...,but...(志愿服務(wù)的內(nèi)容和意義)

Hopefully you will join in the action and extend warm help to those needy persons.(號召大家積極參與)

Youth Volunteer Association

?語篇過手

根據(jù)以上提供的主題、主題表達和語篇結(jié)構(gòu)，寫一份倡議書。第一段介紹發(fā)出倡議的背景或原因，第二段描述志愿服務(wù)的內(nèi)容和意義，第三段號召大家積極參與?？傇~數(shù)控制在80左右。

同時，學習運用前文閱讀中出現(xiàn)的with的復合結(jié)構(gòu)、同位語和定語從句。尤其要注意文章的內(nèi)在邏輯關(guān)系，以及語言的準確性、流利性和得體性。