這是一篇介紹性文章,小動(dòng)物的外形、獨(dú)特的習(xí)性和與我們之間發(fā)生的故事等都是很好的習(xí)作內(nèi)容。學(xué)生可以從自己養(yǎng)過(guò)或熟悉的小動(dòng)物入手,分別從feature、ability和hobbies等方面介紹自己的動(dòng)物朋友。寫(xiě)作文時(shí)要注意:
●選擇一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),可以用she或者h(yuǎn)e來(lái)對(duì)動(dòng)物朋友進(jìn)行擬人化描述。
●要善于使用連接詞and、but、although等來(lái)接連短句。結(jié)尾還可用感嘆句What a lovely...! 使句型更加豐富。
●恰當(dāng)使用形容詞friendly、funny、agile、timid、naughty等來(lái)凸顯動(dòng)物朋友的性格特征,使描寫(xiě)更加生動(dòng)有趣。
I have an animal friend named Tutu. He is a lovely dog with golden fur and big, brown eyes.
Tutu is very friendly. Every morning, he wakes me up by nudging(輕推) my bed with his nose, as if saying, “Time to get up and play!” We often go for walks in the park.
I love spending time with Tutu. He’s not just a pet; he’s my best friend! 六(5)班 王則淳
I have a little cat and it is also my good friend. It is covered in white all over, so I called it Xiaobai.
Xiaobai is so funny. It likes to chase after toys, climb up high places, and pounce(猛撲) on anything
that moves. Sometimes it even does funny tricks like chasing its tail or rolling around on the floor.
Although Xiaobai is naughty and quite lazy, I still take good care of it. Because of it, my home is full of happiness." nbsp; "六(2)班 朱奕璇
I have an animal friend named Tuotuo because it walks too slowly. It has four short legs, a hard shell, and a long neck.
Its favourite food is meat. When I give it some meat, it swims very quickly and sticks its head out(伸出) to eat. In a short time, it finishes all the meat. But sometimes it is very timid; when I touch its shell, it hides its head inside immediately.
In my opinion. I’m lucky enough to have a turtle like this because it can make me happy." "六(3)班 顧友澄
I have a lovely hamster(倉(cāng)鼠). Its name is Tangyuan because it is white and round.
Its eyes are like black beans. It is furry and cute but also very naughty. Tangyuan likes eating melon seeds(南瓜籽). It bites the seeds with its teeth and then peels(剝) the shells with its hands. It stores food in its cheek pouches(頰囊), but it always leaves the shells everywhere. Tangyuan never bites me; it is so nice to everyone.
I think Tangyuan is the loveliest hamster in the world. Do you think so? 六(3)班 章煦淳