Hello， everyone！My name is Tom. Let me introduce my family’ s three meals a day.

For breakfast， I like bread very much. I think it is very healthy. And my parents like salad. They think it’s good for their health. For lunch， I like noodles， and I also eat an apple after lunch. I think apples are very delicious. My mom likes noodles， and my dad likes hamburgers. For dinner， I like strawberries and chicken， because I think they can replenish my nutrition. Besides， I think bananas are awful， so I don’t like them. What’s more， my mother likes milk and oranges very much. However， she doesn’t like hamburgers. She thinks hamburgers make her fat. My father likes carrots and eggs very much， but he doesn’t like chicken. I don’t know why.

This is my family’s diet. Do you think the food we eat is healthy What about yours

河南省鄭州金桂中學(xué)

指導(dǎo)老師 毛海寧

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這篇作文屬于應(yīng)用文，主題明確，層次清晰。第一段引出主題，第二段介紹了自己和家人的飲食習(xí)慣，第三段總結(jié)全文，提出反問。語意流暢，運用and、besides、however等連接詞，增強了文章的連貫性。