孟曉晨

In the modern world， English is becoming more and more important for us. So we must learn English well. But learning English is not as easily as we think for many people. They have different problems in learning English， so I want to say some of my ways to learn English.

Firstly， listening is important. If you want to do well， youd better do lots of listening practice to improve your listening skill. Listening to the radio and watch English language TV are both good ways for listening. Secondly， you should talk to people in English as much as possible in order to improve your spoken English. Is a good idea to make conversations with your friends and practice reading English everyday. Thirdly， you can read English magazines or newspapers and write down the beautiful drills or sentences. Remember， learn by doing.

If you can follow my advice， I think your English will be better and better.

簡評：隨著全球化時代的到來，英語扮演了一個重要的角色。英語，這個國際通用的語言，和我們的生活息息相關(guān)，要適應(yīng)社會的發(fā)展、時代的要求，就必須學(xué)好英語。但是要學(xué)好英語對缺乏語境的在校中學(xué)生來說，確實是個很大的難題。本文小作者結(jié)合自己的學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)驗，給出了切實可行的辦法。文章先由英語的重要性開篇，指出學(xué)習(xí)時不同人有不同的難處，那么該怎么學(xué)才能學(xué)好呢？引入到自己的見解。由“They have different problems in learning English， so I want to say some of my ways to learn English”一句，承上啟下，過渡自然。主體部分也就是小作者的建議部分，從聽、說、讀、寫4個方面，告訴我們中學(xué)生該如何學(xué)，才能學(xué)好。最后呼應(yīng)文章開頭：If you can follow my advice， I think your English will be better and better. 綜觀全文，小作者以總分總的方式來寫這篇文章，格式清晰，內(nèi)容較充實，是一篇實用性、可讀性較強的例文。 （指導(dǎo)教師：周玉芝）