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感謝各位老師和同學(xué)給豆豆寄來(lái)的作品?,F(xiàn)在我們一起來(lái)好好欣賞這些優(yōu)秀文章吧!
When the Spring Festival comes every year, there is a colourful Flower Fair in Guangzhou. Do people only sell or buy flowers in it? No, they don’t.
Let’s go to the Flower Fair and have a look. There are different kinds of flowers here. They are roses, lilies, peach blossoms and so on. The old farmers grow those beautiful flowers for people.
What about other fun things in the Fair? We can see many arts and nice food. Look! The strong cook is cooking some chicken. A young painter is drawing a picture of flowers. A tall singer is singing an English song with his guitar. Some children are running and playing with some toy hammers. The policemen are working in the crowd.
Do you love the colourful Guangzhou Flower Fair?
潘諾懿
廣州荔灣區(qū)匯龍小學(xué) 四年級(jí)
指導(dǎo)老師:蘇潔珍
豆豆:這是一篇描寫節(jié)慶活動(dòng)的作文。小作者通過(guò)自己的視角和筆觸將廣州花市的種種有趣場(chǎng)景描述出來(lái),語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確、描寫生動(dòng),讓人印象深刻,恨不得能參與其中呢。
Mother’s Day first appeared in ancient Greece. In the United States, it is on the second Sunday in May every year. On this day, mothers usually get some gifts.
The carnation is regarded as dedicated to the mothers.
On Mother’s Day, I will draw a picture for my mother and tell her I love her very much. I will cook some nice food and clean the room. I think my mother will be very happy!
張晶瑩
廣州荔灣區(qū)匯龍小學(xué) 四年級(jí)
指導(dǎo)老師:蘇潔珍
豆豆:描寫節(jié)日是同學(xué)們?cè)谟⒄Z(yǔ)寫作時(shí)常常會(huì)遇到的題目。在這篇作品中,小作者用圖文并茂的形式表達(dá)自己對(duì)母親節(jié)的理解,以及對(duì)媽媽的愛,文字流暢、感情真摯,相信媽媽看到了也一定很開心喲!
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Hi, everyone! My name is Kiki. Now, I want to introduce my family to you.
My family is small but warm.
There are three people in my family: my father, my mother and me. My father is a hardworking man. He is a policeman. He works in a police station. He likes watching TV and he watches it every night.
My mother is a housewife. She always goes to the cinema and sees a film. In the evening, she prepares dinner for my father and me.
I am a student. I study at Fangcun Primary School. My school is very big and beautiful. There are thirty-one classes in my school. And there are thirtyeight students in my class. I have three kind teachers: Miss Zhang, Miss Zhao and Mr. Li.
I love my warm family. And I hope that you have a warm family like mine.
豆豆:在這篇作文中,小作者采用“總—分—總”的結(jié)構(gòu),將一家三口每個(gè)人的特點(diǎn)娓娓道來(lái)。文章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn),描寫細(xì)致到位,最后的總結(jié)溫馨而真摯,同學(xué)們?cè)趯懲愖魑牡臅r(shí)候可以借鑒喲。