曲鴻梅

Part 1：設(shè)計理念

教材分析：因?qū)W校是五四學(xué)制，學(xué)生六年級已經(jīng)完成了小初銜接教學(xué)，七年級上學(xué)期學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)相對輕松。為進一步擴大學(xué)生的閱讀量，提高學(xué)生的閱讀能力，結(jié)合本學(xué)期所學(xué)內(nèi)容，有針對性地對學(xué)生進行課外閱讀拓展訓(xùn)練。課外閱讀是課內(nèi)閱讀教學(xué)的輔助與補充，可有效解決七年級學(xué)生閱讀量不足的問題。在閱讀教學(xué)過程中，教師要注重培養(yǎng)學(xué)生對語篇的領(lǐng)悟與分析能力，更要重視培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的語言運用能力和文化意識。

文本分析：為滿足七年級學(xué)生的閱讀需求，本節(jié)課選取了一篇介紹哈爾濱的說明文。說明文是以說明為主要表達方式的文體，要求抓住事物的特點，采用舉例子、列數(shù)字等說明方法，客觀地來說明事物或闡明事理，要求語言簡明，說明方法嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，條理性強，便于學(xué)生讀后仿寫。

Part 2：教學(xué)目標(biāo)

1.知識目標(biāo)：（1）了解說明文的文體特征;（2）學(xué)習(xí)舉例子、列數(shù)字等說明方法。

2.能力目標(biāo)：（1）引領(lǐng)學(xué)生“吃透”文本，把握說明文的文脈，培養(yǎng)學(xué)生運用所學(xué)知識表達觀點、口述同類文章的能力，最終提升學(xué)生的讀后仿寫綜合語言能力;（2）培養(yǎng)學(xué)生使用思維導(dǎo)圖對文段進行解析的技能。

3.情感目標(biāo)：培養(yǎng)學(xué)生熱愛家鄉(xiāng)，熱愛祖國的情感。

Part 3：課堂實錄

Step Ⅰ. Warm-up（2minutes）

T：Dear boys and girls，lets sing an English song.

Ss：......

（設(shè)計意圖：通過演唱與閱讀素材相關(guān)的英文歌曲，為導(dǎo)入環(huán)節(jié)做鋪墊。）

Step Ⅱ. ?Pre-reading （3minutes）

1.Lead in ：predict the topic.

T：Boys and girls，lets look at the map and guess which city it is.

Ss：Harbin.

2 . Brainstorm：talk about the information about Harbin.

T：Yes！ This is our hometown-Harbin. What do you think of Harbin ？ Now，lets brainstorm.

（Two students draw pictures on the blackboard. Other students express their opinions.）

S1：Its famous.

S2：Harbin is cold in winter.

S3：There are many places of interest in Harbin.

S4：Many foreigners like Harbin because of the kind people here.

S5：......

3.Teacher describes Harbin in her eyes.

T：Excellent！You have mentioned many aspects. In my eyes，Harbin is a modern and popular city. It is cold in winter，so we always have a long and cold winter vacation. Also，public transportation here is convenient，so the subway and buses can take us to many places of interest. In addition，its famous at home and abroad. People here are warm-hearted and friendly. Do you want to know more about our hometown？ Today，we will learn more about Harbin by reading the following passage.

（設(shè)計意圖：教師通過圖片引導(dǎo)學(xué)生預(yù)測出閱讀的話題;學(xué)生通過頭腦風(fēng)暴激活已儲備知識。）

Step Ⅲ. While-reading （20minutes）

1.Read for the type of writing. Students read the whole passage in silence quickly and choose the type of writing.

T： At first，please read the article by yourselves and finish Task1. If necessary，you can underline some clue sentences.（Students read for the first time and answer the question.）

Question： ?Whats the type of writing？

A：Narration 記 敘 文 ? B. Exposition 說 明 文

C. Argumentation 議 論 文

T： Ok，can you tell me what the format of this text is？

Ss： The type of this article is an exposition.

（設(shè)計意圖：整體感知文章，辨別文體。為接下來分析說明文的文體特點做準(zhǔn)備。）

2.Read for the topic. Students read the passage again and choose the best title .

Question： Whats the right title ？

A： The story of Harbin.

B： A modern and popular city- Harbin .

C： A place of interest-Harbin.

T： Well done. Now，let's read the text again. But this time，you need to share the theme of the text you think . At the same time，finish Task2 .（Students read again in pairs.）

T： Finish？ Ok，lets look at the question. Which title is suitable for this article？

Ss： A modern and popular city-Harbin.

（設(shè)計意圖：通過預(yù)測標(biāo)題，了解標(biāo)題的作用。）

3.Read for the topic sentences. Students read in pairs and underline the clue sentences. Then，finish Task3.

T： Wow，its easy for you，isnt it？How do you know that？

S1： There are some topic sentences.

T： You are so smart！ How do you find so quickly？

S2： By finding the sentences at the beginning or ending of a paragraph.

T： Can you give an example？

S3： Of course. “Harbin is a big，modern city.” It is the first sentence of the second paragraph，and it is the topic sentence of the second paragraph.

T： You are so excellent. I cant agree with you more.

（設(shè)計意圖：教會學(xué)生快速地找出段落主題句的方法，并幫助學(xué)生梳理主題句和拓展句之間的關(guān)系。）

4. Read for the structure. Discuss and analyze the structure of the passage with the partners. After reading，students can finish Task4.

T： Well，boys and girls，these topic sentences can help you summarize the structure of the text. Whats the structure of the passage？ And how do you know that？

Ss： 總分結(jié)構(gòu)。As we can see that the author tells us Harbin is a modern and popular city in the first paragraph. Then，he introduces Harbin in these two aspects in the following two paragraphs.

T： Yes，you got it！

（設(shè)計意圖：幫助學(xué)生梳理本文的結(jié)構(gòu)，教會學(xué)生構(gòu)建文章框架的方法，提升布局謀篇的能力。）

5～6.Read for the content and sum up the order of writing. Read again carefully and work in groups to finish the Task5 and Task6.

T： Which sentence refers to the location of Harbin？

S1： Harbin in northeast China is a modern and popular place to take a holiday.

Match E.

T： Great. After learning the location，lets move on，What about the features？

S2： Its not only modern but also popular. Match D.

S3： The area of Harbin is 53286 square kilometers. Match B.

S4： More than 10.6 million people live in Harbin. It is about the population. So，I match A.

（設(shè)計意圖：引導(dǎo)學(xué)生分析文章內(nèi)容，幫助學(xué)生了解說明文細節(jié)添加的方法。）

7～8：Read for the description methods. Cooperate and discuss in groups again to finish Task 7 and Task 8.

T： How many description methods do you find？

Ss： Two.

T： What are the methods？

Ss：列數(shù)字和舉例子。

T： Where can you find them？

Ss： “53186 square kilometers”and “More than 10 million ” in the second paragraph mean statistics. And in the third paragraph，“such as，the Central Street ，the Ice and Snow and Dragon Tower” means illustration.

T： Ok，in this passage，we have known two description methods. What are they？

Ss： 列數(shù)字和舉例子。

T： Ok，lets fill in the blanks by using these two methods.

S1： About 28 million people live in and around Beijing.

S2： Beijing has many places of interest such as the Summer Palace，the Great Wall and so on.

（設(shè)計意圖：教會學(xué)生基本的說明方法，運用所學(xué)的說明方法寫句子，為仿寫句式做準(zhǔn)備。）

9. Polish the following sentences.

T： There are many good sentences in the passage. Do you like them？ Here is another way to express the same meaning. Which one do you like better？

Ss： I like the second one.

T： Why？

Ss： 添加了同位語。

T： Yes，there are many ways to polish sentences. Adding the appositive，adverbial or proper conjunctive words can make the sentences more beautiful. Lets practice more to grasp them.（Ss practice polishing the sentences in groups.）

T： Now，we have known how to polish a sentence.

（設(shè)計意圖：掌握通過添加同位語、狀語或恰當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞來美化句子的方法，并通過練習(xí)，最終達到學(xué)以致用，為下文的口頭輸出和課后仿寫打好語言基礎(chǔ)。）

Step Ⅳ. Post- reading （15minutes）

10. Finish the mind map in groups and retell the passage according to the mind map. （5minutes）

T： Boys and girls，I believe you have prepared well to retell the whole passage.（ Ss retell the whole passage according to the mind map.）

（設(shè)計意圖：運用思維導(dǎo)圖復(fù)述文章，為接下來的口述作文做鋪墊。）

11.Show the oral composition about travel agency in groups. One of the group members acts as a tour guide，while the others are tourists. After performing，the other students vote for the best tour guide.（10minutes）

T： Wow，I'm really proud of you. Now you have a chance to be a tour guide to introduce Beijing. Please read the following information.