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建議信是針對某事向收信人提出建議或忠告的信件。建議信有可能是寫給個人，就遇到的某個問題提出自己的看法和觀點(diǎn);也可能是寫給某個組織或機(jī)構(gòu)，就改進(jìn)其服務(wù)提出建議或忠告。建議信通常簡明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和說服力。

建議信通常分為三部分：

1. 首段通常介紹自己并說明目的或交代對方需要建議的主題。

1. 主體部分提出具體建議。

2. 尾段為總結(jié)或預(yù)測可能的結(jié)果，給對方以行動的信心和決心。

模板范文

Dear Peter，

Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are my suggestions.

To begin with， it is a good idea to make more Chinese friends in your daily life， with whom you can practice your spoken Chinese. Whats more， it also helps to listen to Chinese songs and watch Chinese movies， which can enable you to gain a better understanding of Chinese. Besides， keeping a diary is also a good choice， as it can benefit your writing level.

I hope you will find my suggestions beneficial and make great progress in Chinese.

Yours，

Li Hua

◎經(jīng)典句型

篇首句：交代對方需要建議的主題

Im writing to you to know what is going on with... 我寫信給你是想了解一下……怎么樣了。

However， to you， I highly recommend... 但是對你而言，我強(qiáng)烈推薦……

My suggestions are as follows. 我的建議如下。

If I were you， I would... 如果我是你，我就會……

I have learned that you have some trouble in…and I would like to give/offer you the following suggestions. 我知道你在……方面有困難，因此我想給你提如下一些建議。

Youve asked me for advice with regard to/regarding…and Ill try to make some useful /helpful/practical suggestions here. 關(guān)于……你向我征求建議，在此，我盡量提出一些有用的/有幫助的/實(shí)用的建議。

When it comes to /As for… the following are my suggestions./My suggestions are as follows.當(dāng)涉及/關(guān)于……，我的建議如下。

Im writing to give you some suggestions/give you a hand. 我寫這封信的目的是給你一些建議/幫助。

Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how… 我非常高興收到你的來信，在信中，關(guān)于如何……你向我征求建議。

Here are my/some suggestions. 這有我的/一些建議。

篇中句：給出具體建議。

It is also a good idea/also helps to do…， which can… 做……也不錯，這能……

An effective suggestion is that you （should）… 一個有效的建議是你應(yīng)該……

In my opinion/As far as Im concerned / Personally， it would be wise to take the following action. 在我看來，采取如下行動是明智的。

When it comes to/As for…， I would like to suggest / advise / recommend you should… 當(dāng)涉及/關(guān)于……，我建議你應(yīng)該……

I think it would be of benefit / beneficial if you… 我認(rèn)為如果……，將會受益。

Doing…is a good/great/better choice. 做……是一個好/棒的/更好的選擇。

You may as well/had better do… 你不妨/最好做……

篇尾句：預(yù)測可能的結(jié)果，給對方以行動的信心和決心。

We are waiting for your good news. 我們期待你的好消息。

Its my pleasure to offer you some advice on... 很榮幸在……方面為你提供建議。

I will be glad if you will take my advice/suggestions into consideration. 如果你能考慮我的建議我將非常高興。

I hope that my suggestions/advice will be beneficial/of benefit to you.

我希望我的建議對你有益。

I hope you will find my suggestions/advice helpful/useful/practical/beneficial.

我希望你認(rèn)為我的建議有幫助/有用/實(shí)用/有益。

I feel that it would be beneficial if... 我認(rèn)為如果……將會有益。

Im writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about... 我就我們已經(jīng)討論的關(guān)于……的問題寫信給你。

Ive been thinking about the question you wrote in the letter. In my opinion， you should... 我一直在思考你來信中提到的問題。在我看來，你應(yīng)該……

You have asked me for my advice with regard to...and I will try to make some constructive suggestions. 就……一事你曾征詢過我的意見，我會盡量給你提供一些有建設(shè)性的建議。

When it comes to such a situation， I would like to suggest that you can... 當(dāng)遇到這樣的問題時，我建議你可以……

As to the problem you mentioned in the last letter， here are my suggestions. 對于你信中提到的問題，以下是我的建議。

◎經(jīng)典考題

假定你是李華，收到英國朋友Alice的郵件，以下是郵件內(nèi)容：

Dear Li Hua，

How are you doing these days· Im having some problems and would like to get your advice.

My parents want me to spend my summer with them this year but I would prefer to go somewhere with my friends. I love my parents but sometimes they are overprotective. I feel that I am old enough and responsible enough to go away without their supervision（監(jiān)護(hù)）.

Any suggestions you could give me about this issue would be greatly appreciated.

Yours，

Alice

請給Alice回一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 感謝她的信任;

2. 回應(yīng)她的請求;

3. 說明你的理由。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右;

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Alice，

Yours，

Li Hua

【試題解讀】

1. 審題立意

此篇書面表達(dá)要求學(xué)生寫一封建議信，根據(jù)建議信的語用功能分析，書信的重點(diǎn)內(nèi)容在于提出合理、有建設(shè)性的建議。題目提供了一篇請求幫助的郵件，學(xué)生在寫作前應(yīng)認(rèn)真讀郵件，明確寫作內(nèi)容，考慮合理的建議。

2. 寫作要點(diǎn)

①感謝對方的信任;

②回應(yīng)請求：獲悉對方遇到困難，表示愿意幫助;

③提出建議：分要點(diǎn)列出;

④說明理由;

⑤表達(dá)希望。

【佳作賞析1】

Dear Alice，

Ive received your email saying that youre facing some problems with your parents.① Here are my suggestions.

In my opinion②， although youre old enough to go away with your friends， you need to communicate with your parents properly. Hence， I suggest you have a hearttoheart talk with them.③Remember that they love you so much that they might worry you will be in danger without their company.④ So what you need to do is to show youre independent and to avoid turning this chat into a quarrel.⑤

Hope my suggestion will be of help to you. And hope that youll solve the problem successfully and have a good summer?、?/p>

Best wishes！

Yours ，

Li Hua

亮點(diǎn)分析：本篇習(xí)作語言地道、流暢、自然，詞匯豐富，眾多的高級句式結(jié)構(gòu)被作者運(yùn)用得恰到好處。實(shí)為一篇不可多得的考場佳作。

① 作者開門見山，簡潔地概括出了英國朋友遇到的問題。

② 此句用in my opinion引出自己的觀點(diǎn)。類似的表達(dá)還有 in my view， as far as Im concerned， personally等等。

③ 句子間行文邏輯性強(qiáng)，有效使用語篇銜接詞hence，短語a hearttoheart talk的使用恰到好處。

④ 短短的一句話，卻用了三個從句，兩個賓語從句和一個狀語從句，這使文章句式豐富，值得學(xué)習(xí)。

⑤ 本句精彩多多，從語言來看，句首so的使用，使句子過渡自然，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn);what引導(dǎo)的主語從句顯得高端上檔次。

⑥ 文章結(jié)尾言語禮節(jié)性頗強(qiáng)，非常符合建議信的特點(diǎn)，既提出希望又表達(dá)祝愿，be of help =be helpful， 更顯高級。

◎小試牛刀

假定你是李華，最近你的英國好友Tom來信說他對高中生活很不適應(yīng)，不知道如何結(jié)交新的朋友。請你用英文給他寫一封回信，提出一些建議。內(nèi)容如下：

1. 與人接觸時面帶微笑;

2. 學(xué)會傾聽;

3. 積極參加班級活動并展示自己的才能。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Tom，

Im glad to receive your letter.

Hope my suggestions will be beneficial to you. Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours，

Li Hua