彭明芳

激活·素養(yǎng)解讀

實(shí)踐·讀寫(xiě)整合

My dream career我的職業(yè)夢(mèng)想

1 Since I was a child， I have been addicted to books. I can’t go a single day withoutreading something. As time goes by， I am definitely sure that my dream career is to becomea professional writer like Shakespeare and J.K. Rowling.

2 In order to make my dream come true， I have made it a rule to pick up a pen and justlet my thoughts out every day. As a child， I used to write stories. As a teenager， I wasencouraged by my teachers who told me that I had an innate （與生俱來(lái)的） talent forwriting. They knew how passionate I am about writing， and how that passion slips throughmy fingertips to the paper. In my freshman year， I tried to figure out what A MidsummerNight’s Dream and The Tragedy of Julius Caesar were about. Macbeth was much easier tounderstand in my sophomore year. Gradually， I can be inspired by anything： an expression，a song and a movie. Once I get inspired， it’s like the wheels turning faster and faster as Ithink out one possible story after another. I’m working so hard to make a breakthrough inthe competitive world of publishing.

3 I don’t really know the reason why I love writing so much. But what I know is that Iwant to write and leave something behind. I always feelthat there is something in my mind about putting astory down on paper for friends across the globe toread and understand， and about finding just the rightwords to describe what I can see so clearly in my head.Through writing， I have found true happiness and the value of life， which means a lot to me.

4 Now， I have realized my dream career and become a professional writer. As the oldsaying goes，“ Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety?nine percent perspiration.” Ithink the secret to achieving a dream career is that we need not just talent， but passionand perseverance， which are essential to us.

Activity A Reading for understanding

語(yǔ)篇解碼

（一）主題歸納

What is the text mainly about？

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（二）結(jié)構(gòu)分析與信息梳理

Fill in the blanks according to the text with only one word for each blank.

Activity B Reading for writing

一、詞塊積累

be addicted to 沉溺于

as time goes by 隨著時(shí)間的流逝

make one’s dream come true 使某人的夢(mèng)想實(shí)現(xiàn)

let one’s thoughts out 表達(dá)某人的想法

have a talent for 在……方面有天賦

slip through one’s fingertips to the paper 從某人的指尖滑落到紙上

be inspired by 被……鼓舞

think out 仔細(xì)思考；全面思考

make a breakthrough 有所突破

leave something behind 留下一些東西

in the competitive world of publishing 在競(jìng)爭(zhēng)激烈的出版界

realize a dream career 實(shí)現(xiàn)一個(gè)職業(yè)夢(mèng)想

be essential to 對(duì)……必不可少

二、典句賞析

1. 賓語(yǔ)從句

I always feel that there is something in my mind about putting a story down on paperfor friends across the globe to read and understand， and about finding just the right wordsto describe what I can see so clearly in my head. 我總覺(jué)得，把一個(gè)故事寫(xiě)在紙上，讓世界各地的朋友閱讀和理解，找到合適的詞語(yǔ)來(lái)描述我腦海中清晰可見(jiàn)的東西，是我心中的一件大事。

【點(diǎn)石成金】該句有兩個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，第一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句由that 引導(dǎo)；第二個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句由what 引導(dǎo)。

【例句仿寫(xiě)】只有當(dāng)我們明白自己熱衷的是什么的時(shí)候，我們才知道自己將來(lái)要做什么。

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2. 定語(yǔ)從句

I think the secret to achieving a dream career is that we need not just talent， but passion and perseverance， which are essential to us. 我認(rèn)為實(shí)現(xiàn)職業(yè)夢(mèng)想的秘訣是我們

不僅需要天賦，還需要熱情和毅力，這些對(duì)我們來(lái)說(shuō)是至關(guān)重要的。

【點(diǎn)石成金】which引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句，指代passion and perseverance，目的是強(qiáng)調(diào)實(shí)現(xiàn)職業(yè)夢(mèng)想的關(guān)鍵不僅僅只是天賦，熱情和毅力也是必不可少的。

【例句仿寫(xiě)】他不僅學(xué)習(xí)數(shù)學(xué)很有天賦，也有毅力解決數(shù)學(xué)問(wèn)題，從不放棄，這才是他成功的關(guān)鍵。

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三、寫(xiě)作遷移

假定你是李華，你校將以“My dream career”為主題，舉辦英語(yǔ)演講比賽。請(qǐng)你根

據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿。

1. 你的職業(yè)夢(mèng)想；

2. 選擇的理由；

3. 如何實(shí)現(xiàn)。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)80左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 至少需要使用一個(gè)本文中解析過(guò)的句式；

4. 注意段落內(nèi)的邏輯關(guān)系。

Dear teachers and fellow students，

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Thank you for listening.

寫(xiě)作導(dǎo)引

激活思維

本次的寫(xiě)作任務(wù)是寫(xiě)一篇演講稿。在演講稿中，學(xué)生需要談?wù)勛约旱穆殬I(yè)夢(mèng)想、選擇的理由及如何實(shí)現(xiàn)，并且需要使用賓語(yǔ)從句或定語(yǔ)從句。這些寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)和要求與所給語(yǔ)篇的主題語(yǔ)境是緊密相關(guān)的。我們可以通過(guò)整合同一主題的閱讀材料的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言，梳理寫(xiě)作思路和積累素材。

素材積累

本次的寫(xiě)作任務(wù)是基于同一主題的語(yǔ)篇閱讀下的寫(xiě)作，我們可以通過(guò)學(xué)習(xí)、模仿并運(yùn)用閱讀中的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)，如詞塊和句型，積累寫(xiě)作的語(yǔ)言素材。

（一）自我介紹，說(shuō)明演講主題

1. I feel honored to give you a speech， whose topic is promoting public awareness ofprotecting the ocean， which is now a top priority. 我很榮幸能為你們做一次演講，本次演講的主題是提升公眾保護(hù)海洋的意識(shí)，這是當(dāng)前的重中之重。

2. It is my great honor to be here to share with you my opinions on“ Be smart onlinelearners”. 我很榮幸能在這里與大家分享我對(duì)“做聰明的網(wǎng)絡(luò)學(xué)習(xí)者”的看法。

3. Today I want to talk to you about a very important subject. 今天我想和你們討論一個(gè)非常重要的話題。

（二）陳述演講具體內(nèi)容，表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)

1. The reason why we should protect our environment immediately can be listed asfollows. 我們應(yīng)該立刻開(kāi)始保護(hù)環(huán)境的理由列舉如下。

2. There is no doubt that/There is no denying that physical exercise is very importantto our physical and mental health. 毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)的是，體育鍛煉對(duì)我們的身心健康很重要。

3. What I strongly suggest is that we should set aside some time and exercise on aregular basis， making it part of our daily routine. 我強(qiáng)烈建議我們應(yīng)該留出一些時(shí)間，定期鍛煉，讓它成為我們?nèi)粘Ｉ畹囊徊糠帧?/p>

4. More importantly， it is helpful for us to consult reference books or ask teacherswhen we encounter some difficulties. 更重要的是，當(dāng)我們遇到困難的時(shí)候，查閱參考書(shū)或者問(wèn)老師是非常有幫助的。

5. In addition， I think it would be beneficial if you could read some Chinese books andmagazines， which will help you to improve your reading ability. 此外，我認(rèn)為如果你能夠閱讀一些中文書(shū)籍和雜志，這將會(huì)非常有益，將有助于提升你的閱讀能力。

6. If we do these things well， we will be able to grow up happily and healthily. 如果我們把這些事情做好，我們就能夠健康快樂(lè)地成長(zhǎng)。

（三）總結(jié)演講內(nèi)容，表達(dá)感謝

1. I hope what is mentioned above might be helpful to you！ Thank you for yourlistening！ 我希望上面提到的能對(duì)你有所幫助！謝謝你的聆聽(tīng)！

2. Let me conclude my speech with the following comments. 讓我用以下評(píng)論來(lái)總結(jié)我的演講。

3. From what has been discussed above， we can safely draw the conclusion thatlearning English is really important to us. 通過(guò)以上討論，我們可以得出結(jié)論，學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)對(duì)我們而言非常重要。

4. All in all， devoting my life to exploring space is meaningful to me. 總而言之，奉獻(xiàn)我的人生去探索太空對(duì)我而言是非常有意義的。

寫(xiě)作支架

本次的寫(xiě)作任務(wù)是寫(xiě)一篇演講稿。根據(jù)任務(wù)中的要求，語(yǔ)篇結(jié)構(gòu)可定為“點(diǎn)明演講主題+演講的具體內(nèi)容+總結(jié)觀點(diǎn)”。文章的框架如下：

Dear teachers and fellow students，

I am Li Hua. It is my great honor to be here to share...with you（點(diǎn)明演講主題）

My dream career is to become... Since I was a child， ... When I grow up， what I want topursue is... In order to realize my dream， ... There is no doubt that... In addition， ...（演講的具體內(nèi)容）

All in all， devoting my life to...is meaningful to me. （總結(jié)觀點(diǎn)）

Thank you for listening.

語(yǔ)篇過(guò)手

根據(jù)以上提供的主題、主題表達(dá)和語(yǔ)篇結(jié)構(gòu)，寫(xiě)一篇演講稿。第一段點(diǎn)明演講主題；第二段陳述演講的具體內(nèi)容——你的職業(yè)夢(mèng)想、選擇的理由及如何實(shí)現(xiàn)；第三段總結(jié)觀點(diǎn)。詞數(shù)80左右。

同時(shí)，學(xué)習(xí)運(yùn)用前文閱讀中出現(xiàn)的賓語(yǔ)從句或者定語(yǔ)從句。尤其要注意文章的內(nèi)在邏輯關(guān)系，以及語(yǔ)言的準(zhǔn)確性、流利性和得體性。