How time flies！ Two years have passed. I have undergone tremendous changes.

First， I have become a good helper. In the past， I was extremely shy. Thanks to my best friend who encouraged me to make friends and helped me with my study，I learned how to help others actively. Second， I have become a good learner. I didn’t develop good learning habits before. Luckily， my teacher gave me some useful advice.With my teacher’s help，I have mastered many learning skills. Third， I have become a wiser man. The more knowledge I obtain，the more ways I can figure out to solve problems.

Looking back at the past two years， I have become a good helper， a good learner and a wiser man. I will move on to be a better man in the future.

河南省鄭州市第四十九中學(xué)

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作者描述了自己初中階段的成長(zhǎng)，就自己的三個(gè)改變分別展開(kāi)敘述，有對(duì)比，有舉例。詞匯運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確，靈活運(yùn)用多個(gè)短語(yǔ)、句型，將自己的成長(zhǎng)變化用helper、learner和wiser man來(lái)總結(jié)，顯示出不俗的思辨能力。