徐州七中 彭向梅

Step 1 感知·閱讀導(dǎo)航

話題導(dǎo)入

《旅行青蛙》游戲，由日本公司Hit-Point創(chuàng)建，自2017年12月份以來，這款游戲已經(jīng)被中國(guó)的應(yīng)用商店下載了大約400萬次。旅行蛙一直在中國(guó)的蘋果應(yīng)用商店中占據(jù)榜首。游戲的內(nèi)容，就是幫助你的青蛙為它的個(gè)人旅程做準(zhǔn)備。給青蛙提供食物和金錢，玩家卻無法控制青蛙何時(shí)出發(fā)或何時(shí)返回。而青蛙和玩家交流的方式是發(fā)送旅游目的地的自拍明信片。值得思考的是，這樣的數(shù)字游戲讓許多人產(chǎn)生了共鳴。這款游戲很容易玩，一些玩家們覺得這個(gè)游戲很吸引人；一些玩家說它能幫助他們思考為人父母的問題；一些玩家說能緩解年輕人的焦慮，流行佛系青年。新時(shí)代的青少年，我們是否應(yīng)該透過游戲，挖掘流行現(xiàn)象背后的原因并進(jìn)行深度思考呢？全文378詞，難度較低，建議用時(shí)7分鐘。

閱讀立意

閱讀時(shí)應(yīng)達(dá)到以下三個(gè)基本目標(biāo)：

1.能快速掌握文章的宏觀結(jié)構(gòu)，細(xì)細(xì)品味文內(nèi)的邏輯關(guān)系；

2.歸納從提出問題、分析問題到解決問題的行文模式；

3.能對(duì)熱點(diǎn)話題進(jìn)行深度思考。

Recently,you may have noticed yourWeChatMoments feed being filled with pictures of a wise-looking frog.

With captions圖說like, “My frog has been gone for more than 24 hours.I’m getting worried.” It’d be easy to mistake this video game animal for a real one.

However,the images are from Japanese mobile gameTravel Frog,orTabikaeru.

Travel Frogis a simple game,yet it’s managed to go around among young Chinese people,especially females.You fill the frog’s backpack with a lunch box,a lucky charm幸運(yùn)符,and some travel gear旅行裝備,and then send it on its way.

While the frog’s gone,all there is to do is wait for it to return home.

So why exactly is this game so popular?The answer could lie in the current trend of“Buddha-style佛系的youth”,with many turning to a slow and relaxed lifestyle.

“It’s like the life of a monk和尚who lives life following his heart,”30-year-old Ge Yuan from Shanghai,a fan of the game,toldChina Daily.

“It’s not a game that you will get obsessed上癮的with,as there is no ranking list among players,”addedTongjiUniversity student Yuan Linghuan.

Given the large amounts of stress that young Chinese people face,the pursuit of an easy life makes sense.

But some believe that although taking time out to relax is good for us,we shouldn’t let our love for this mysterious animal take over our lives.

“Don’t become a lonely frog-raising youth,” wrotePeople’s Dailyon itsSina Weiboaccount.“Cherishevery moment and respect each minute of your life.”

So while it’s nice to have something to care for,just don’t forget to take care of yourresponsibilitiesin the real world too—at least while you’re waiting for your frog to return from itsadventure.

Step 2 實(shí)踐·文本解讀

立意呈現(xiàn)

1.Get the structure

2.Complete the main idea according to the basic understanding of the passage with only one word for a blank.

A Japanese mobile 1._______Travel froghas managed to gain popularity among 2._______Chinese people.The 3.______behind the phenomenon has been discussed in the passage,with 4._______offered as well.

點(diǎn)石成金

通過解讀文體和分析語篇體裁結(jié)構(gòu)，學(xué)生能夠在宏觀上把握篇章要素和特點(diǎn)。通過不斷閱讀的大量積累，最終形成自己的閱讀策略。第一步，抓語篇結(jié)構(gòu)，劃分段落。第二步，把零碎的信息，用完整的語言串起來，這一過程就完成了閱讀分析到內(nèi)化結(jié)構(gòu)的過程。

【答案】1.game 2.young 3.reasons 4.suggestions

閱讀掃障

I.熟詞生義

文中詞條 基本含義 引申含義 生義例句stress（Para.9） 精神壓力 強(qiáng)調(diào)；重要性I think the company places too much stress on cost and not enough on quality.我認(rèn)為公司過于強(qiáng)調(diào)成本，而對(duì)質(zhì)量重視不足。

Ⅱ.熱詞積累

Vocabulary

1.cherishv.to love sb/sth very much and want to protect them or it珍愛；鐘愛；愛護(hù)

2.responsibilityn.a duty to deal with or take care of sb/sth,so that you may be blamed if sth goes wrong責(zé)任；負(fù)責(zé)

3.adventuren.an unusual,exciting or dangerous experience,journey or series of events冒險(xiǎn)；冒險(xiǎn)經(jīng)歷；奇遇

Phrases

1.mistake this video game animal for a real one把這個(gè)電子游戲動(dòng)物誤認(rèn)為是真的

2.fill the frog’s backpack with...把青蛙的背包裝滿……

3.on its way在進(jìn)程之中

4.lie in在于

5.turn to a slow and relaxed lifestyle轉(zhuǎn)向緩慢而輕松的生活方式

6.follow his heart追隨他的內(nèi)心

7.ranking list排行榜

8.take over接管

9.makes sense有道理；講得通

10.on itsSina Weiboaccount在新浪微博賬號(hào)上

Ⅲ.句型積累

While the frog’s gone,all there is to do is wait for it to return home.青蛙走了之后，接下來就只需要等它回家就行了。

So while it’s nice to have something to care for,just don’t forget to take care of your responsibilities in the real world too.所以，盡管有一些值得關(guān)心的事情是很好的，但是不要忘記在現(xiàn)實(shí)世界中也要承擔(dān)你的責(zé)任。

第1句的While the frog’s gone中，while表示 “在……期間；當(dāng)……的時(shí)候”；第2句的while it’s nice to have something to care for中，while 表示“雖然；盡管”。 此外，while還有“與……同時(shí)”、“（對(duì)比兩件事物）……而，……然而”的意義。

句式仿寫

盡管我愿意幫忙，但是沒有多少時(shí)間。

【答案】While I am willing to help,I do not have much time available.

Given the large amounts of stress that young Chinese people face,the pursuit of an easy life makes sense.考慮到中國(guó)年輕人面臨的巨大壓力，追求輕松的生活是有意義的。

此處“Given”既可以做介詞后跟名詞，也可以充當(dāng)連詞后跟that+從句，意為“考慮到；鑒于”，是高中英語常見表達(dá)。

句式仿寫

考慮到她喜歡孩子，教書看來是很適合她的工作。

【答案】Given her interest in children,teaching seems the right job for her.

Step 3 運(yùn)用·讀寫整合

1.凸顯文本特點(diǎn)

通過閱讀判斷，本篇文章類型為現(xiàn)象解釋型，語篇發(fā)展是描述現(xiàn)象、分析問題和表明態(tài)度。具體落實(shí)為分析原因和提出建議。讀寫過程，重點(diǎn)關(guān)注原因和建議的信息提取和文本重構(gòu)。

2.信息提取和文本重構(gòu)

原文信息提?。ㄔ颍?/p>

①The answer could lie in the current trend of“Buddhastyle youth”,with many turning to a slow and relaxed lifestyle.

②It’s like the life of a monk who lives life following his heart.

③It’s not a game that you will get obsessed with,as there is no ranking list among players.

④Given the large amounts of stress that young Chinese people face,the pursuit of an easy life makes sense.

整合重構(gòu)：

There are various reasons accounting for this phenomenon.To begin with,manyturn to a slow and relaxed lifestyleand there isa tendency of“Buddha-style youth”.Meanwhile the majority of young Chinese peopleface a large amount of stress,so playing a video game is good for us to relax and pursue an easy life.Last but not least,it could help you have an easy life in some ways withoutgetting obsessed with the game.

原文信息提取（建議）：

①But some believe that although taking time out to relax is good for us,we shouldn’t let our love for this mysterious animal take over our lives.

②Don’t become a lonely frog-raising youth.

③Cherish every moment and respect each minute of your life.

④Don’t forget to take care of your responsibilities in the real world too.

整合重構(gòu)：

From my perspective,it is high time that we should keep a balance between video games and real life.First and foremost,although spending time torelax is good for us,we shouldn’tlet our love for this mysterious animal take over our lives.What’s more,cherish every moment and respect each minute of your life.Lastly,we are supposed totake on our responsibilities in the real worldinstead ofbecoming a lonely frog-raising youth.（以上黑體字為語篇詞塊復(fù)現(xiàn)）

閱讀除了提取整合信息，也是讀者與文本對(duì)話的過程。觀點(diǎn)可以不同，但需要邏輯正確，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。

3.寫作訓(xùn)練

閱讀全文，請(qǐng)概括話題，分析《旅游青蛙》游戲流行的原因以及對(duì)游戲背后的思考。

【參考范文】

As portrayed,a video game calledTravel froghas managed to gain popularity among young Chinese people,especially females,which has aroused people’s concern.

There are various reasons accounting for this phenomenon.To begin with,many turn to a slow and relaxed lifestyle and there is a tendency of “Buddha-style youth”.Meanwhile the majority of young Chinese people face a large amount of stress,so playing a video game is good for us to relax and pursue an easy life.Last but not least,it could help you have an easy life in some ways without getting obsessed with the game.

From my perspective,it is high time that we should keep a balance between video games and real life.First and foremost,although spending time to relax is good for us,we shouldn’t let our love for this mysterious animal take over our lives.What’s more,cherish every moment and respect each minute of your life.Lastly,we are supposed to take on our responsibilities in the real world instead of becoming a lonely frog-raising youth.

4.讀寫歸納

讀寫整合需要通過閱讀提取信息，通過寫作輸出信息。讀為寫服務(wù)，寫為讀提升。寫什么讀什么。讀目標(biāo)明確，寫水到渠成。閱讀立意解決了篇章結(jié)構(gòu)處理的問題，為目標(biāo)寫作文的第一段。原因分析的信息提取重構(gòu)，為第二段。建議的信息提取重構(gòu)，為第三段。

Step 4 提升·素養(yǎng)建構(gòu)

咬文品句，精雕細(xì)琢

1.Recently,you may have noticed yourWeChatMomentsfeedbeing filled with pictures of a wise-looking frog.

【賞析】此處，feed怎樣理解呢？

請(qǐng)看 《中國(guó)日?qǐng)?bào)》的報(bào)道：On Sunday night,manyWeChatusers found in theirWeChatMoments news feed an update from a new yet long-awaited friend—advertisement.The news feed ads looks like a regular update from your friends,but with a small “Sponsored” button in the top right corner.

周日晚上，很多微信用戶發(fā)現(xiàn)他們的微信朋友圈信息流里出現(xiàn)了一個(gè)期盼已久的新朋友——廣告。信息流廣告看起來像是朋友們的普通更新，但其右上角有一個(gè)小的“推廣”按鈕。信息流廣告，可以用news feed ads表示，信息流即news feed。

2.Recently,you may have noticed yourWeChatMoments feedbeing filled withpictures of a wise-looking frog.（Para.1）

With captions like,“My frog has been gone for more than 24 hours.I’m_ getting_ worri_ed.” It’d be easy to mistake this video game animal for a real one.(Para.2)

請(qǐng)關(guān)注畫線句所用的時(shí)態(tài)哦。

【賞析】時(shí)態(tài)的巧妙之處在于可以傳達(dá)文本很多深層的意義。第一句，have noticed為謂語部分；yourWeChatMoments feed意為 “微信圈信息流”；being filled withpictures of a wise-looking frog為賓語補(bǔ)足語，表明微信圈信息流的狀態(tài)，是一直被一個(gè)模樣明智青蛙的很多圖片充斥著。being filled with非常生動(dòng)。第二句，“I’m getting worried,”此句中用正在進(jìn)行時(shí)，表達(dá)越來越焦慮了，傳神。