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◎文體概述
興趣愛好包括個(gè)人在音樂、舞蹈、表演、閱讀、體育運(yùn)動(dòng)、游戲(包括網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲)、烹飪、影視、音樂、旅游、動(dòng)植物等方面的愛好。
關(guān)于“興趣與愛好”這一話題,命題人可能要求考生介紹某一個(gè)興趣愛好、寫一份校園比賽的海報(bào)或給英國網(wǎng)友寫一封信描述自己如何度過課余時(shí)間等,還可能就家長如何培養(yǎng)孩子的興趣愛好等話題發(fā)表看法。例如:
1. 你班舉行了一次以“我的愛好”為主題的演講比賽,請你談?wù)勀愕膼酆眉袄碛桑⑻?hào)召同學(xué)們和你一起培養(yǎng)這項(xiàng)愛好;
2. 假定你有一位英國網(wǎng)友叫Jack,請你給他寫一封信介紹你在課余時(shí)間的愛好,并詢問他在課余時(shí)間的愛好是什么;
3. 現(xiàn)在很多學(xué)生是“追星族”,他們密切關(guān)注著自己喜歡的明星的一舉一動(dòng)。試分析當(dāng)下流行文化對青少年興趣愛好的影響。
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◎經(jīng)典句型
1. What I'm interested in most/What interests me most is that... 我最感興趣的是……
2. I enjoy going to the movies/reading/talking with people/going for picnics. 我喜歡看電影/讀書/與人交流/野餐。
3. I'm interested in communicating with people from different cultures. 我對和來自不同文化的人交流感興趣。
4. Taking good care of others is also my strength. 會(huì)照顧別人也是我的優(yōu)點(diǎn)。
5. We had great fun singing, dancing and telling stories. 我們從唱歌、跳舞、講故事中獲得了很多樂趣。
6. I prefer watching a TV show to going to a concert. 我寧愿看電視節(jié)目,也不愿意去聽音樂會(huì)。
7. He goes in for playing online games. 他喜歡玩在線游戲。
8. Shopping is my favorite hobby in my spare time. 購物是我閑暇時(shí)最大的愛好。
9. I hate visiting museums, for I think they are boring. 我討厭參觀博物館,因?yàn)槲矣X得它們讓人感到無聊。
10. English is my favorite subject and I've won several prizes in English contests. 英語是我最喜歡的科目,并且我在英語競賽中曾多次獲獎(jiǎng)。
11. What' more, my major is computer, and I have a strong interest in software. 此外,我的專業(yè)是計(jì)算機(jī),并且我對軟件有濃厚的興趣。
12. I am an outgoing and hard-working girl with good qualities and responsibility. 我是一個(gè)外向的、工作努力的女孩,具備優(yōu)秀的品質(zhì)和責(zé)任心。
13. School activities not only enrich our school life but prepare ourselves for developing other interests. 學(xué)校的各種活動(dòng)不僅豐富了我們的校園生活,而且也為我們培養(yǎng)其他興趣做好了準(zhǔn)備。
14. Being an active young person, I like sports and outdoor activities. Besides, I'm easy to get along with and I like making friends. 作為一個(gè)活躍的年輕人,我喜歡體育運(yùn)動(dòng)和戶外活動(dòng)。此外,我很容易相處并且喜歡交朋友。
◎典題鏈接
(2012·江西卷)某英文報(bào)社舉辦以 “I Like Reading”為主題的征文活動(dòng), 你打算投稿。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇短文:
1. 你為什么喜歡讀書;
2. 你喜歡讀哪一類的書(例如:歷史、科學(xué)、文學(xué)等)?請給出至少兩個(gè)理由。
注意:詞數(shù)120左右。
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【試題解讀】
1. 審題立意
這篇征文是一篇開放性文章。談?wù)撟约旱哪撤N興趣愛好以及原因。這種文章容易下筆,考生可以根據(jù)自身狀況充分發(fā)揮自己的想象,語言發(fā)揮的空間也很大。可以首先闡述自己為什么喜歡讀書,給出至少兩個(gè)理由。然后列舉一些自己喜歡的書。最后總結(jié)出讀書對自己身心的影響。這樣的文章考生很容易寫成流水賬,特別是表達(dá)愛好的時(shí)候,容易在文中大量重復(fù)詞語和句式。所以,考生要想讓自己的文章脫穎而出,必須在文章的框架、詞匯和短語的運(yùn)用,以及句型句式變換上下功夫。
2. 寫作要點(diǎn)
(1)為什么喜歡讀書,給出至少兩個(gè)理由;
(2)列舉一些自己喜歡的書;
(3)讀書對自己身心的影響。
3. 注意事項(xiàng)
(1)要清楚地列出至少兩個(gè)喜歡閱讀的理由;
(2)要使用第一人稱敘述;
(3)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡詞;
(4)因?yàn)槭桥d趣與愛好,所以時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。
【佳作賞析】
I like reading
I like reading very much. First of all, books give me a large amount of knowledge. Second, my mother is always encouraging me to read more. She believes that reading is a good habit, and it can develop my thinking and learning abilities.
Different from others, I always read the books of Jin Yong. From Jin Yongs books, we can see how a hero grows up. My favorite book is Legends of the Condor Heroes. It tells us that as long as we're hard-working, everything can be successful.
Reading makes a wise man. My life will be less meaningful without books!
亮點(diǎn)分析:文章主題明確,開篇點(diǎn)題,前后呼應(yīng)。作者首先告訴大家自己熱愛閱讀;然后依次說出兩個(gè)喜歡閱讀的理由:一是書本能給自己帶來大量知識(shí),二是受母親的影響。最后指出自己喜歡金庸的《射雕英雄傳》,并且說明喜歡金庸的書的原因,可使自己得到鼓勵(lì)和自信,這樣可以使文章主題明確,結(jié)構(gòu)完整,內(nèi)容充實(shí)。整篇文章一氣呵成,表達(dá)流暢,有條理。
●參考范文
I like reading
Reading is my favorite hobby. I can never stop the love for reading because books are like wise teachers as well as good friends in my life. As we know, books are the source of knowledge. I benefit a great deal from reading.
There are a variety of books for us to choose from, like history books, science books, literary books and so on. But what interests me most is literary books, especially those by famous writers. For one thing, they help to improve my writing skills and broaden my horizons. For another, they can enrich my life and provide me with great fun. Isnt it a pleasure to have great calm in mind while you are reading?
◎小試牛刀
假定你是李華,你的外國網(wǎng)友Tom對中國的武術(shù)非常感興趣,想在暑期來中國學(xué)習(xí)武術(shù)。請根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇短文歡迎他的到來:
1. 介紹中國武術(shù);
2. 學(xué)習(xí)武術(shù)的益處;
3. 推薦他來少林寺學(xué)習(xí)武術(shù)。
注意:
1. 詞數(shù)100左右;
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
參考詞匯:武術(shù) martial arts
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua