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Directions： For this part， you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on the importance of developing a healthy lifestyle among college students. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

這道作文試題要求考生論述大學(xué)生養(yǎng)成健康生活方式的重要性。我們?cè)谡撌鲋幸欢ㄒo緊扣住大學(xué)生這個(gè)主體，不能泛泛地論述健康生活方式的重要性。健康的生活方式包括很多方面，但我們?cè)谡撌鲋凶詈冕槍?duì)當(dāng)今大學(xué)生的弱點(diǎn)，從均衡的飲食、充足的睡眠、經(jīng)常性鍛煉等方面展開。

這篇作文可以寫三段。

第一段先提出觀點(diǎn)：養(yǎng)成健康的生活方式對(duì)今天的大學(xué)生越來(lái)越重要。然后，引用一項(xiàng)最近在上海所做的調(diào)查作為支撐：84.2%的大學(xué)生承認(rèn)經(jīng)常吃高熱量的零食，熬到后半夜，而且每周鍛煉少于1小時(shí)。

第二段論述養(yǎng)成健康的生活方式對(duì)大學(xué)生的重要性。我們可以先指出健康的生活方式是大學(xué)生在校園里獲得成功的前提條件，然后從飲食、睡眠和鍛煉三個(gè)方面展開論述。首先，均衡的飲食為大學(xué)生提供一整天的營(yíng)養(yǎng)和能量，這樣他們才能高效率地處理作業(yè)。其次，充足的睡眠幫助大學(xué)生在學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)保持頭腦清醒。此外，有大量的研究顯示，經(jīng)常鍛煉與記憶力的改善密切相關(guān)。

本文可以用建議法結(jié)尾。第三段先總結(jié)全文，指出健康的生活方式是大學(xué)生學(xué)業(yè)優(yōu)異和事業(yè)成功的秘訣。然后，建議大學(xué)鼓勵(lì)自己的學(xué)生吃得健康、經(jīng)常鍛煉，并且保持充足睡眠。

下面請(qǐng)看參考范文：

Developing a healthy lifestyle has become increasingly important for college students. According to a recent survey conducted in Shanghai， 84.2 percent of the college students polled admitted to habitually eating high-calorie snacks， staying up until the small hours and working out less than one hour a week.

A healthy lifestyle is an essential precondition for college students success on campus. For instance， having a balanced diet provides college students with nutrition and energy throughout the day. As a result， they will be able to deal with schoolwork more efficiently. Similarly， adequate sleep helps college students keep their mind fresh for learning. And there are numerous studies showing that taking regular exercise is closely correlated with improved memory.

Sticking to healthy living may be tough for college students， but a healthy lifestyle is a recipe for their academic excellence and future success. Now is the time for colleges and universities to encourage their students to eat healthily， exercise regularly and get plenty of sleep. （163 words）

語(yǔ)言亮點(diǎn)借鑒：

1. According to a recent survey conducted in Shanghai， 84.2 percent of the college students polled admitted to habitually eating high-calorie snacks， staying up until the small hours and working out less than one hour a week. 根據(jù)最近在上海所做的一項(xiàng)調(diào)查，84.2%接受調(diào)查的大學(xué)生承認(rèn)經(jīng)常吃高熱量的零食，熬到后半夜，并且每周鍛煉少于一小時(shí)。admit to （不情愿地）承認(rèn)。stay up until the small hours 熬到后半夜。work out 鍛煉。

2. And there are numerous studies showing that taking regular exercise is closely correlated with improved memory. 而且有許多研究表明，經(jīng)常鍛煉與記憶力的改善密切相關(guān)。be closely correlated with 與……密切相關(guān)。

3. Sticking to healthy living may be tough for college students， but a healthy lifestyle is a recipe for their academic excellence and future success. 堅(jiān)持健康生活也許對(duì)大學(xué)生并不容易，但健康的生活方式是他們學(xué)業(yè)優(yōu)秀和未來(lái)成功的秘訣。a recipe for… ……的秘訣。

4. Now is the time for colleges and universities to encourage their students to eat healthily， exercise regularly and get plenty of sleep. 現(xiàn)在是大學(xué)鼓勵(lì)自己的學(xué)生吃得健康、經(jīng)常鍛煉并保持充足睡眠的時(shí)候了。Now is the time for sb to do sth 現(xiàn)在是某人做某事的時(shí)候了；這是結(jié)尾段中提建議的一個(gè)常用句型。

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Directions： For this part， you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay that begins with the sentence “Today increasing importance is being attached to cultivating college students team spirit.” You can make statements， give reasons， or cite examples to develop your essay. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

這道作文試題要求考生論述培養(yǎng)大學(xué)生的團(tuán)隊(duì)精神的重要性。本題與2019年6月的大學(xué)英語(yǔ)六級(jí)試題（on the importance of team spirit and communication in the workplace）有些相似。但二者也有區(qū)別，本題只需要論述培養(yǎng)大學(xué)生的團(tuán)隊(duì)精神的重要性，而且范圍也不限于職場(chǎng)。

本文可以用定義法開頭，即文章開頭用淺顯的語(yǔ)言給團(tuán)隊(duì)精神下一個(gè)定義， 然后指出團(tuán)隊(duì)精神無(wú)論是在學(xué)校里還是在職場(chǎng)上對(duì)大學(xué)生都至關(guān)重要。這樣我們就引出了本文所要討論的話題。

第二段論述團(tuán)隊(duì)精神對(duì)大學(xué)生的重要性。我們不妨從校園和職場(chǎng)兩個(gè)方面展開。首先，團(tuán)隊(duì)精神對(duì)大學(xué)生在學(xué)校里取得好成績(jī)很重要。不管大學(xué)生學(xué)的是什么專業(yè)，共享資源的能力都有助于他們?cè)趯W(xué)業(yè)上取得優(yōu)異成績(jī)。比如，當(dāng)大學(xué)生在學(xué)習(xí)中遇到困難，可以很容易地通過(guò)團(tuán)隊(duì)協(xié)作獲得別人的幫助。其次，培養(yǎng)大學(xué)生的團(tuán)隊(duì)精神能夠?yàn)樗麄兾磥?lái)的事業(yè)做準(zhǔn)備。在當(dāng)今社會(huì)，鮮有工作不需要與別人合作，所以合作能力對(duì)于事業(yè)成功不可或缺，團(tuán)隊(duì)精神在這方面正好可以幫助他們。

本文可以用建議法結(jié)尾。第三段先總結(jié)全文，指出團(tuán)隊(duì)精神不但能幫助大學(xué)生在學(xué)業(yè)上表現(xiàn)出色，而且能幫助他們?nèi)〉檬聵I(yè)上的成功。然后，建議大學(xué)更加重視培養(yǎng)大學(xué)生的團(tuán)隊(duì)精神。

下面請(qǐng)看參考范文：

Today increasing importance is being attached to cultivating college students team spirit.

Team spirit refers to the desire and willingness of people to work together and help each other as part of a team. It is of crucial importance for college students in every phase of life， be it in school or in the workplace.

Team spirit is important for college students during their time on campus. No matter what their major is， the ability to pool resources goes a long way towards helping them shine academically. For instance， through working in a team college students can easily seek help from others when they meet with difficulties in their academic pursuit. More importantly， cultivating team spirit in college students prepares them for their future career. Few jobs today dont involve working with others. So the ability to collaborate is indispensable for achieving success in the workplace. This is where team spirit works for them.

Team spirit can not only help students excel academically in school but also help them carve out a successful career. It is now high time that colleges and universities attached more importance to inculcating team spirit in their students. （181 words）

語(yǔ)言亮點(diǎn)借鑒：

1. It is of crucial importance for college students in every phase of life， be it in school or in the workplace. 團(tuán)隊(duì)精神在大學(xué)生的人生每個(gè)階段都極其重要，不管是在學(xué)校里還是在職場(chǎng)上。be it in school or in the workplace 是一個(gè)省略形式的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句，完整的形式是 whether it be in school or in the workplace。

2. No matter what their major is， the ability to pool resources goes a long way towards helping them shine academically. 不管他們的專業(yè)是什么，共享資源的能力對(duì)幫助他們學(xué)業(yè)上取得優(yōu)異成績(jī)都非常有用。go a long way towards 對(duì)……大有幫助。shine 出色，出類拔萃。

3. Team spirit can not only help students excel academically in school but also help them carve out a successful career. 團(tuán)隊(duì)精神不但能幫助學(xué)生在學(xué)業(yè)上表現(xiàn)優(yōu)秀，而且能幫助他們?nèi)〉檬聵I(yè)上的成功。carve out a career 闖出一番事業(yè)。

4. It is now high time that colleges and universities attached more importance to inculcating team spirit in their students. 現(xiàn)在，大學(xué)應(yīng)當(dāng)更加重視向?qū)W生灌輸團(tuán)隊(duì)精神。It is now high time that 是該做某事的時(shí)候了；后面的從句用虛擬語(yǔ)氣，這是一個(gè)提建議的常用句型。attach more importance to doing sth 更加重視做某事。inculcate 灌輸。

* 上海外國(guó)語(yǔ)大學(xué)國(guó)際新聞碩士，講師，專注大學(xué)英語(yǔ)寫作教學(xué)十余年。