領(lǐng)" 銜" 人：謝建民（正高級教師、江蘇省特級教師）

組稿團隊：江蘇省無錫市謝建民名師工作室

本期撰稿：溫彩霞（華東師范大學(xué)江陰實驗學(xué)校）

Chinese painting is an art form with a long and wonderful history. It shows China’s deep cultural heritage（遺產(chǎn)） and special aesthetic（審美的） ideas. Chinese painting has developed over thousands of years， forming various styles and schools.

In Chinese painting， artists use traditional tools like brushes， ink， and rice paper. The brushstrokes are smooth and free， carrying the artist’s feelings and expressions. Scenes of nature， people， birds， and flowers are common subjects. Artists often try to convey a mood or a sense of harmony（和諧） with nature through their paintings.

Some very famous Chinese paintings have made a lasting impression on the art world. Along the River During the Qingming Festival by Zhang Zeduan is a great work. It clearly shows the daily life and social activities in the Northern Song Dynasty with detailed and big scenes. Another well-known work is Five Oxen by Han Huang. The painting shows five oxen in different positions and looks， showing the artist’s excellent painting skills and great ability to observe. Qi Baishi’s Shrimp is also highly thought of. Through simple lines and ink， the shrimps seem to become alive on the paper. Xu Beihong’s Galloping Horse shows the strength and energy of the horses with bold and vigorous（充滿活力的） strokes.

Each painting is not only a visual show but also a spiritual trip. It catches the essence and spiritual core of the subjects. Chinese painting has had a significant effect on many art styles around the world and still attracts people with its elegance and depth. It is a valuable treasure in the storehouse of world art， and its charm will continue to shine through the ages.

1. What makes Chinese painting so special？

2. Which is your favourite Chinese painting？ Why？

假設(shè)你有機會參加一個國際青少年藝術(shù)交流活動，活動中要求你介紹自己最喜歡的一種藝術(shù)形式（如繪畫、音樂、舞蹈、戲劇、攝影等）。請寫一篇英語發(fā)言稿參與分享，介紹你最喜歡的藝術(shù)形式和原因，并分享一次你與這種藝術(shù)形式相關(guān)的難忘經(jīng)歷。

Dear friends，

My favourite art form is photography.

Why do I like photography？ First， it can stop time. A photo can keep a beautiful place， a nice face， or an important thing. We can remember them many times. It helps me look at the world in different ways. It makes me see small and nice things.

Let me tell you an unforgettable thing about photography. Once， I went to a small village. I saw an old man sitting in front of his house and enjoyed the sun. His face looked old， but his eyes were kind and quiet. I took a photo quickly. When I saw the photo later， I was moved. This made me know that photography is not only taking pictures， but also telling stories.

So photography is my favourite and an important part of my life. It lets me record the nice world and share it with others.

升格展示

Dear friends，

I’m very glad to have this chance to introduce my favourite art form to you. My favourite art form is photography.

Why do I love photography？ First of all， it has the amazing power to freeze a moment in time. A single photograph can keep a beautiful landscape， a touching expression， or an important event， allowing us to make those valuable memories alive again and again. Secondly， photography helps me see the world from different ways. It makes me pay more attention to details and notice the beauty that I might have overlooked before.

Let me share an unforgettable experience about photography. Once， I went to a small village on a trip. There， I saw an old man sitting in front of his house， enjoying the sunshine. His face looked old， but his eyes were so gentle and peaceful. I quickly took a photo. When I saw the photo later， I was deeply moved by it. This experience made me realize that photography is not only about taking pictures， but also about telling stories and touching people’s hearts.

In conclusion， photography is not only my favourite art form but also an important part of my life. It allows me to record the beauty of the world and share it with others.

Thank you for listening！

綜合點評

這是一篇發(fā)言稿。在升格文中，小作者根據(jù)題目要求，正確使用發(fā)言稿的格式書寫，分享了自己最喜歡的藝術(shù)形式以及原因，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，內(nèi)容完整。文章開門見山，講述了自己最喜歡的藝術(shù)形式；第二段講述了自己喜歡攝影的兩個原因，并運用了連詞使文段更具邏輯性；第三段使用一般過去時分享了一次自己難忘的攝影經(jīng)歷；最后一段再次點題，強調(diào)攝影帶給自己的收獲。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主，也使用了并列句、復(fù)合句和一些高級句型結(jié)構(gòu)，可讀性強。