劉江蘭

The environment is becoming worse and worse. More and more trees are being cut down every day. Lots of lands are used to build buildings. The air，water and land are polluted. Everyone should protect the environment.

We can do lots of things to help protect the environment. We should take our own bags when shopping.Turn off the lights before leaving a room. Don't throw rubbish everywhere. We can go to school on foot or by bike instead of taking a car. Use both sides of paper.

In a word， if everyone pays more attention to our environment， there will be less pollution and our life will be better. Let's take actions to protect our environment！

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